Stranger and the Snow Queen
By Stranger
A stranger wanders an alabaster desert of winter
In search of a snow queen
The earth asleep beneath a thick, white blanket
Resting for the labors of spring
He walks among leafless trees of gray and black
Outlining where tender, green life has been
and will be again
His legs heavy, he stops
He watches feather crystals of ice
Stack themselves upon bony branches
Like sand in an hour-glass
With each grain that falls
He feels his skin harden
And his heart slow
Cold begins to creep into his muscles
Turning them to brittle stone
His eyes freeze into black ice
But he can still see
He can still see as she approaches
He tries to reach out to her
But, collapsing under the weight of what he has become,
He begins to shatter from the inside
First, icy marrow and bone
Then blood chilled to glass
and skin cracking like the surface of a frozen pond
A million red splinters mingle with snow flakes
As they fall to the ground
To become a part of her kingdom, forever
Awards
Comments on "Stranger and the Snow Queen"
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On Friday, October 7, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
I loved the imagery in this one. Also, it had a very interesting ending. Well done. - 10:43
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On Thursday, October 2, 2008, Morbid_insanity
(74) wrote:
i love the imagery in this. its a nice medium between that wintery scene and time. (even the parallels between the winter and dessert imagery). its a wonderful piece
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Reminds me of back in the day when I used to role play...I love it..
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, IceDragoness
(193) wrote:
Wow... I felt pain as you described the body freezing and breaking >.< oh this is so good! I love it.. I hope I never hurt anyone like that ~Dawn
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful. I could imagine the scene in my head as the poem unfolded. Good job.. :)
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
hm, this was by far the most interesting poem I've read. A dark fairytale...very nicely done
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
very different... I liked.
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
I love it! But I already told u that & why... thanks.
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On Saturday, April 19, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
sad but yet romantic....a ..yeah
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
beautiful and tragic... a faery tale, indeed.