I Dream
By shadowsinthelight
I dream in the daytime
I dream every night
Rapid eye movement
In color or black and white
I dream of the future
I dream of the past
Sometimes hard to remember
They fade away so fast
I had dreams I was flying
With eagles up ahead
I had dreams I was falling
Always landing in my bed
I dreamt of nymphs and fairies
To mystic places I was lead
They could be called nightmares
In someone else's head
That was the way I used to dream
The way it used to be
Now you are the one common theme
Reoccurring in all of my dreams
Now I have dreams about you
You're wearing nothing but skin
With my arms wrapped around you
Feeling your heat from within
I've flown inside of rainbows
With you by my side
All the myriad colors
Reflecting in your eyes
I dream I play guitar
In a rock and roll band
You are my black clad groupie
Your leather always close at hand
I dream I'm a fisherman
Harvesting the seven seas
You, a mermaid teaching me
How wonderful my life could be
I sleep twelve hours a day
To spend half my life with you
I took it literal, when you said
Only in my dreams could I ever have you
So I dream in the daytime
I dream every night
Rapid eye movement
In color or black and white
I dream of the future
I dream of the past
Sometimes hard to remember
They fade away so fast
©1998 by steve giacomini
Comments on "I Dream"
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely amazing, very captivating.
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On Friday, December 12, 2008, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
you are like a song of singing colours. thank you
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On Tuesday, May 6, 2008, Anoblechicken
(38) wrote:
the was beautiful i wish i had a dream stalker
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On Saturday, November 24, 2007, snow
(14) wrote:
it rhymes and reminds me of good times. sleep is good mainly for its dreams
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On Friday, June 8, 2007, demonicus
(26) wrote:
i've read this before....
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A former member wrote:
this is a really beautiful poem and i love it, indeed she doesnt know what she is missing, good job!
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A former member wrote:
this is good
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A former member wrote:
just something about it hits really close to home...great job!
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A former member wrote:
very well composed bravo indeed well done so inticing i caught me like a hook
great job ~Ends
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On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
this was so soft and warm... like a nice fluffy pillow to sink into. :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
wow nice read. i like the repetition. it made the poem perfect.
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A former member wrote:
allways to bring unconsciously the needs to know of needle nose...
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, Audrey_Star
(26) wrote:
the end repitition is realy impressive it works so well...a great read...
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A former member wrote:
I neglected to comment on this the first time and I couldn't find the poem again. Now I'm gonna make sure to comment and add it to my favorites. Amazing words.
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On Friday, August 22, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Woa, I never commented on this one after the site got redid! Heh. Of course, this will always be one of my favs from you, I love the line 'I sleep 12 hours a day, to spend half my life with you', that is simply genious. Great job.
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On Wednesday, June 25, 2003, nell
(270) wrote:
wow, wicked write. I really enjoyed this one thx;)
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On Sunday, May 25, 2003, ColdScaredAlone
(77) wrote:
steve, you are so talented with words. anyone can string them together in sentences, but only those with talent can make them flow so meaningfully as you can. your poetry is simply beautiful.
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
very nice poem I so agree!
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A former member wrote:
I love dreams, they take you to places you can't go in real life...really good poem ^_^
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On Saturday, June 14, 2003, WraithRider
(4) wrote:
omg...i can so relate to that