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Comments by Audrey_Star

"the end repitition is realy impressive it works so well...a great read..."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "I Dream" by shadowsinthelight

"The last three lines of this poem sent shivers up my back. This is truly a nice piece of work. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Jesus wants to die." by Exodus

""Left to taste the world go by." great line! nice piece. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "I dont want to be here." by Exodus

"wow, there is passion in this piece...nicely done, very well expressed. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Real Hate" by Cinn

"I liked it...the scattered rhyming was interesting and kept me reading. The matching of form to content was impressive . . . clever. the sentiment is understandable, most people can relate to at least one, if not all, of these questions. Thank you. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "SITTING HERE THINKING" by Johny_D_Lewis

""Of the downfall my pride has brought" a great line and a great piece. but it almost reads like it could use more.but the fact that it feels like it could use more only makes it better because it leaves the reader with the ability to conclude the thought "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "As Yet Untitled" by GreekPhilosopher

"makes me think. I like it. even the repeating is nice. and that's sometimes hard to pull off. well done. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "I Once Knew A Man" by GreekPhilosopher

""All these people are one and the same Living together in a world full of shame." well said. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Within" by GreekPhilosopher

""who hurt you for all the right reasons" are there right reasons...? "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Touched" by Godot

"I'm not a big fan of rhyme...but I gotta tell ya, this one just does it for me."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Equilibrium" by Godot

"touching."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "These Are Lies" by Godot

"nice read."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "..." by muckraker

""stirring a feather" . . . well said."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "The Catcher" by Midnight Phoenix

"this is really good, thank you."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Perfect World - Tribute to all Dark Poets" by Midnight Phoenix

"those who can say a lot with a few words are those who have talent. well done."
Posted by Audrey_Star on ""constitution"" by muckraker

"you're saying what should be said."
Posted by Audrey_Star on ""number fifteen"" by muckraker

"great closing line. "
Posted by Audrey_Star on "many walks" by Jonas

"I should thank you (mw) for this it came to me after reading 'Manic Vibration'. so thank you."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Nod" by Audrey_Star

"talent."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Complicated Times, Call For Simple Minds" by Zahgurim

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