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Just This
By A_Puppet_Show
Light shone a pathetic silhouette,
a scavenger child: We are no enemy,
yet we do not trust, you cling to me,
beg for remembrance; just this?
He did, so many years so much light,
and on his skin the silhouette.
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© 2006 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Thursday, September 21, 2006.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Just This"
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On Thursday, September 28, 2006, hate_doll
(265)
wrote:
a fleeting photograph of something so tangible but the reality has a surreal feel to it.
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
'pathetic'.. I so love that word in that first line. It slightly reminds me of so much 'modern' british poetry that I was never a fan of until I really found out what poetry was..
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
aside from that remark.. I would just like to reiterate what oldie said, haha.
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On Friday, September 22, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
This has a magical feel to it, I enjoyed reading it. Ciao, T/S
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On Friday, September 22, 2006, Storm
(143) wrote:
6 lines.. by which you manage to write a novel in my mind. Always a pleasure, Tiger, to get a kaleidoscopic view into your world. Be well. ~S
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On Friday, September 22, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
I don't know if I got IT or not. But I definately get it. Writethehellon.
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On Friday, September 22, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Oh wow, I got lost in those words for a few minutes. I felt as if I were floating, and whispering from above holding out my hand. Dunno why...? Beautiful!!!! Julia~
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On Thursday, September 21, 2006, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
One of these days tig... I'm actually going to comprehend your stuff. Until then I'm just going to stare with that dumb look on my face and just know its something amazing. :::OLd
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On Thursday, September 21, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
humble in its form......beautiful in its voice...........well done.............urban
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