Our First Kiss

By LiP Stiches

He with a face that is so wanting

And I with eyes still longing...


Being still for so long

Love disappears with in the mist of life.


As the sun rises in the east

The cloudiness never really fades

And the sky seems to darken.


No rain will fall

Only thoughts from our minds

Will linger in this fog

And eventually merge into one.


Then as if solar eclipse has just ended

Lifting the shadow form the earth,

Love finds us...

Carries us...

Awakens us from this dream called life.


Then
As if with new eyes
I see him
Glowing with hope
Starring with passion
We merge
With a kiss
So light
sooooooooo soft...

Frozen in time for eternity


And never wanting to let go.

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Copyright 2005 LiP Stiches
Published on Wednesday, September 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Thursday, June 21, 2018, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    This is a misunderstood piece. Some of the best stuff is. :)

  • Dei On Wednesday, September 21, 2005, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    not bad

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