Brainwash

By Syn

I am...

hurt
pain
pleasure
fame

clouds
sky
dirt
life

jacked
dead
broken
lead

poor
slave
countless
grave

burned
jaded
shattered
faded

hard
numb
doubting
dumb

fixed
alone
battered
stone

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Monday, June 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Melancholic VIncent On Friday, June 15, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    Really like this one, it lets the reader get a meaning for every word

  • murder_in_clubland On Monday, June 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    very very nice.your words seem to eat me~alley

  • WikidGrrl On Monday, June 14, 2004, WikidGrrl (26)By person wrote:

    i love this...die ana

  • urbanhumility On Monday, June 14, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    a stream of conciousnes bathed in despair........beautiful........urban

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