A Crimson Mist

By monalisamarie

Loneliness and I, we keep each other
Company throughout the longest night
Soon the sun rises and it is day
The hour of us made of clay

Hope is dying on the ground
A crimson mist swirls around
Insert the scalpel into the mud
Proclaim the beauty of our blood

Tonight the night is the most dark
Tonight the heart is taken apart
How beautiful is the pouring rain
How much more can we tolerate?

Death slid her fingers through my ribs
Ripped them open to expose my hands
They were clutching my heart, such feeble things
Staring at a symbol wondering what it means

Hope is dying on the ground
A crimson mist swirls around
Insert the scalpel into the mud
Proclaim the beauty of our blood

The wages of sin is death, so when shall I be paid?
Melancholy a food forbidden to be craved.
O my eyes will not cease crying
O my body will not cease dying

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© 2006 monalisamarie
Published on Sunday, April 16, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love the feeling in this poem!!!! pleasee do write on!!

  • LiP Stiches On Monday, April 17, 2006, LiP Stiches (42)By person wrote:

    "The hour of us made of clay ".......NICE!B .E. A. U. tiful!!!!!!!!!!! I do enjoy this poem for all these emotions and imafges that swirl in cahos..I LVOE IT!!!!!!!!!!

  • Equinox Asylum On Monday, April 17, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    'The wages of sin is death, so when will I be paid.' Brilliant line.

  • A former member wrote: Cremson?

  • A former member wrote: intense and mind-capturing....very thought provoking also, indeed. magnificent in every way.

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