L'arbre Morte

By Thorn

Quand je regarde
Par la fenetre...
Je ne me sens
Rien.

Mon coeur est comme le ciel:
Froid
et
Gris

Mes emotions sont comme les arbres:
Mortes

Je vois un arbre
Mais pas de feuilles

Cet arbre a l'air deprime...
Quand je le regarde dans ma glace,
Je vois...

Cet arbre...

C'est moi.

[English version pour ce qui ne parle pas le francais]

When I look
Out the window...
I feel
Nothing.

My heart is like the sky:
Cold
and
Grey

My emotions are like the trees:
Dead

I see a tree
Devoid of leaves

This tree seems so depressed...
When I look at it in my mirror,
I see...

This tree...

Is me.

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Published on Friday, December 2, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "L'arbre Morte"

A former member wrote: C'est une poÃ©sie vraiment triste. Je sais bien comme on se sent en moments comme Ã§a. Maintenant, ce sentiment est fixÃ© dans mon coeur. C'est une poesie vraiment belle. Merci pour l'avoir Ã©crit, et pardon si mon franÃ§aise n'est pas parfait. Je suis italienne. ^^
A former member wrote: you know... you never cease to give me chills when i read your work...
A former member wrote: C'est triste... je me sens deprimee moi-meme quand je le lis, mais au meme temps c'est belle... tres bien fait, tu m'as inspire d'ecrire un poeme en francais maintenant :)
On Friday, June 16, 2006, Mathesix (40) wrote:

C'est bonne, monsieur! Je t'aime Francais.. mais j'ecrire ca langue plus de mal. Pardon my French but it has been many years since I last wrote in the beautiful language. You do it much justice! -Josh
On Monday, February 27, 2006, monalisamarie (113) wrote:

Chilling
On Tuesday, January 24, 2006, DarkPoet (229) wrote:

C'est belle cette poem, j'aimerais voir plus comme ca.
A former member wrote: very nice i just wonder how you came up with the ideal to write it in a different langue
On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Thorn (282) wrote:

I dunno, I was planning on writing one in French anyways, and then my teacher gave us an assignment, and it was a right-place-right-time thing.
On Monday, December 12, 2005, Nail Bunny (161) wrote:

c'est du bon travaille, ca... un poem deprime mais beau... bien ecrit, et bien traduille... je l'aime
On Tuesday, December 13, 2005, Thorn (282) wrote:

Merci, Lapin, mon ami. A mon avis, on doit ecriver plus souvent en francais, non?
On Monday, December 19, 2005, Nail Bunny (161) wrote:

Oui. Mais apres l'examain, je pense que je ne parlerai que l'anglis pour un semain ou plus.
On Friday, December 2, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309) wrote:

sorry i didnt comment on this b4 i left..but again..you've captured me with this write... is this the one you wrote for the class...? a class...whatever..but i like it..great write! ♥-Kel
On Friday, December 2, 2005, A Burning God (46) wrote:

*gives Thorn some water to make himself better, like the tree* very nice!!!!!!!!!!! ;)
On Friday, December 2, 2005, blue (1409) wrote:

Thorn-san!! So great.. distinctly clear in its delivery! *bows* sugoi! ~b
On Friday, December 2, 2005, Thorn (282) wrote:

Arigato, Blue Tzu!
On Friday, December 2, 2005, blue (1409) wrote:

hai! =)