Someday

By Aethelwyne

Cradled
In your arms
I slowly
Fade
Into forever
Knowing this moment
Cannot last
But wanting no more
Than to be here
For eternity

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Copyright 2005 Aethelwyne
Published on Friday, July 29, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, May 3, 2018, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Absolutely lovely and exactly my kind of forever ever.

  • Smiles On Thursday, May 3, 2018, Smiles (55)By person wrote:

    Those fleeting moments we hold dear will be forever ingrained into our minds.

  • A former member wrote: nice...:)

  • Grey Lies On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, Grey Lies (185)By person wrote:

    clinging on time....and this write blows my mind away...simple yet so much...lovely!

  • A former member wrote: beutiful, true and not depressing

  • Serenity On Saturday, August 6, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Some moments are worth placing in a bottle to open when we need a good smile.

  • PoeticHellion On Friday, July 29, 2005, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    I like. Short and sweet.

  • LiP Stiches On Friday, July 29, 2005, LiP Stiches (42)By person wrote:

    For eternity in safe armms loving arms peace never felt this eutopian KICK ASS!

  • Thorn On Friday, July 29, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    This is absolutely beautiful. It really speaks to me. Very nice.

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