train

By Kfritz

Train shakes
Elder man
Green shirt
Button missing
Chest hair showing
Wife, maybe mistress
Sitting next to him
His hand has a ring
Her fingers, bare
And hold a magazine
Filled with sex advice
We’ve just crossed the boarder
No longer in new york

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Copyright 2004 Kfritz
Published on Monday, July 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • LiP Stiches On Thursday, October 6, 2005, LiP Stiches (42)By person wrote:

    SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Northstar On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    i like this one--the flow is awesome--and I often enjoy the stream-of-consciousness writes--nice!

  • A former member wrote: this was meaningful to read

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