My Angel

On a blood red thread you left my heart to dangle.

Blindly I descend into Hell to find you, my Angel.

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Published on Friday, May 27, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "My Angel"

On Tuesday, January 24, 2006, Eladrim (47) wrote:

The point is the contrast, One I thought was an Angel (typically a being of light, hope, and all around goodness) led me into Hell (typically a place of pain and torment)
A former member wrote: don't mean to be an ass, but i see little potential in this. in fact, i feel like i just wasted almost a minute of my life...
A former member wrote: Different than your others. I'm not real religious but I don't like the stereotyping of hell.. meh. I love the first line though. - Salem
On Friday, September 23, 2005, LiP Stiches (42) wrote:

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!..i....i...i....love this!
On Monday, May 30, 2005, Elise (187) wrote:

Ouch, short and to the point. Blinded by love and lead into darkness.
On Monday, May 30, 2005, Eladrim (47) wrote:

^_^ great to hear from you again
On Saturday, May 28, 2005, Labitina (37) wrote:

even though it's just two lines it says a lot, great write ~ Christina
On Friday, May 27, 2005, NeverMore (11) wrote:

Short and sweet
On Friday, May 27, 2005, Eladrim (47) wrote:

thnx, i couldn't think of anything to go with it that i liked so i left it only two lines