ten thousand miles from home
By Six-Out
dry.tonight- have you seen the world [end]
.tell me a story of my life. as seen through beautiful eyes
bright- and the trail of passion/silk in the sunset
brok.en, and I'm so fucked
drunk and lonely, sometimes: we all need a hand
on the face of my clock- counting down the days until september
a dream of color and gold. and your breath is drenched in atrocity
taste the tip of a bullet, and hope it splits your skull
swallow. our faded tomorrow
and your hands dance an outdated symphony.
orchestrated chaos, as your lips kiss a paper sky-
hearbeats kicked in tune to neverwhere
and perfection is an illusion. voice cracking on the line
drunk and lonely, and I'm brok.en/
and somehow- I hate tomorrow. a bookshelf in the corner
as faces are forgotten- we're lost
fixated.with a chapsticked lip- and a tongue of poison
it's over. fin. the grand finale
and we're all so broken/ this world is fucked
Comments on "ten thousand miles from home"
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On Thursday, May 25, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
I hate you for being so brilliant.
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A former member wrote:
Damn man this was great, especially the second and fourth stanzas and the last line. Awsome fuckin work. ~Ryan
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"and your hands dance an outdated symphony. orchestrated chaos, as your lips kiss a paper sky-". . You always leave me fucking amazed with your words, you're damn great . . you're the talent that I wish I could come close to..
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On Monday, December 13, 2004, Kittichoo
(37) wrote:
true. but atleast we get the comfort that it may be blown up any day now. -Kittichoo
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On Sunday, December 12, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
"orchestrated chaos, as your lips kiss a paper sky-" You make me want to cry with this. I understand it all too well. Nicely done. -Glass
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On Sunday, December 12, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
and somehow- I hate tomorrow. a bookshelf in the corner- i don't know what it is about this line, but i suddenly felt like i understood the stoned mindset you had...and it all came together for that fleeting moment...very cool
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On Sunday, December 12, 2004, sIo
(898) wrote:
*tear*
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On Sunday, December 12, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
this world is indeed fucked, my friend. very well captured. A_C
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A former member wrote:
amazing write
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On Sunday, December 12, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
wow six---this piece is exceptional--the imagery is so captivating---and your word choice is perfect
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A former member wrote:
lovely. i loved it