Watching

By Butterfly

I sat and watched you from afar today
As you slowly, unknowingly walked away
I wanted to run to you
And cry to you
To say how much I love you
And tell you how much I'll miss you
To tell you how I don't want to leave
So I sat and almost cried today
As I watched you slowly, unknowingly walk away

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Copyright 2004 Erica Evans
Published on Saturday, August 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx On Sunday, October 24, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx (36)By person wrote:

    I hate it when stuff like that happens because you can't do anything to stop it. Nice write.

  • A former member wrote: sad, true and written beautifully. awesome write.

  • Storm On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    Emotions out on paper, rough. Been through something similar, hurts as hell... greatly put.

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