Sit in your little room.

By Amanda Parnell

Have you ever felt like
breaking dow,
while you put
away your broken crown.

Your two faces are so
hard to reach,
while you just
sit there like a peach.

Everything you wanted
to say,
lives on each
and everyday.

It's so hard to tell
whats real
or not,
Because they
have slowly forgot.

So you sit in your
little room,
and your face is
full of gloom.

But the only thing
that keeps you sane,
is the undieing
ammounts of cocaine.

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Copyright 2004 QueenKittensEyes
Published on Sunday, September 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: cocain..can relate..thinking of starting back..jk..great write.i liked it , it was simple and to the point:0

  • Angst Queen On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    realistic work and very sad. keep up the good work, queen, i look forward to more

  • A former member wrote: this is a very realistic poem...I like it...keep up the good work

  • A_Puppet_Show On Sunday, September 26, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    Reminds me Of Mr. S. King ... He got over it though, but he did write a great deal of ehmm quantity...and a bit of quality hehe Sorry Stephen, not funny you being in the car crash either...uhmm of the poem, it is great. Straightforward. -Tiger-

  • A former member wrote: Pretty good, it's simple. I like it.

  • Munkey On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    Drugs are bad...but this write is very good so they even out and there is balance to the world once again. Good write keep it up. -Munkey-

  • Butterfly On Sunday, September 26, 2004, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    I likey. It a nice reading quality it just flows so nice.

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