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smile softly
By toy soldier
there once was a girl
who thought she was ugly inside
but along came a boy
who saw the beauty her eyes failed to hide
three little words
is all the boy wanted to say
but insted of sharing his feelings
the girl hid herself away
the boy's had just a taste
of what he cant keep
but that hurts the girl
just a little too deep
they have taken this to far
in matters of the heart
so they smile softly
as they push themselves apart
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toy soldier
Published on Tuesday, October 11, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
Quaint beautiful, written with a tainted happiness. All in all, great job.
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On Thursday, June 7, 2007, carlosjackal
(3016)
wrote:
The 1st stanza made my heart lift up and the rest was so sad but true in many ways. Excellent write. -Carl
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A former member wrote:
there's something about your poetry that just seems.....familiar. I can't quite put my finger on it. But i feel like i know you......love this piece. It's actually a very unique perspective
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
awesome as always.
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On Monday, November 14, 2005, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
wow i wanna cry, so sad
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On Thursday, October 27, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
oh..this is crushing but all too familiar...its so sad that we push what we want most away out of fear..excellently captured ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
..i love this poem it makes me really sad but i have to love it..
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Liz
(267) wrote:
*too deep... and *themselves... Sorry. I try not to be an asshole about editing issues, but this piece is too good to not be flawless.
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2005, toy soldier
(26) wrote:
thank you liz, good lookin out.
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