Kill or Be Killed

By lordshadow

kill or be killed

with

skillfully placed
strategic disgrace

that's

kept to yourself
or displaced/dispersed
from pursed lips
disposed of like tiny
strips of paper
on which you've written
every virtue
moral
ethical
code

and simply

tossed

them

away

this

poisoned noise
annoying destroys
my self-awareness
chipping away with the
insults you say
that don't just float over my head
and away
to be heard by another
absorbed like a sponge

you lunge and thrust
your mistrust upon
the easily influenced
construed the wrong way

confused

each day I walk
with a lowered head
a downcast gaze
impossible to see
brighter days with
mirrored shades
like sharpened blades

so in my eyes your words reflect the hurt

because words are knives
and knives end lives


so kill or be killed

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Copyright 2004 lordshadow
Published on Wednesday, September 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AHHH On Monday, January 2, 2006, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    absolutely awesome.

  • Sin On Sunday, November 21, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    oh dear lord this was amazing! the last three lines drove it all home

  • A former member wrote: This was compelling and brutal. Excellent work, sweets.

  • Dayer On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    Holy hot damn! Brilliant & Powerful

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    powerful brutaltruth; the last four lines are exceptionally good. your metre and structure never fails to impress; excellent write.

  • Zhee On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was so beutifully done! i loved the end... grat write!

  • Graveyard_Desciple On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple (39)By person wrote:

    bad ass shit right here. awesome!

  • A former member wrote: sweat shit! this poem has a flow of it's own and god damn.... god damn

  • A former member wrote: errr... sweet

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