Kill or Be Killed
By lordshadow
kill or be killed
with
skillfully placed
strategic disgrace
that's
kept to yourself
or displaced/dispersed
from pursed lips
disposed of like tiny
strips of paper
on which you've written
every virtue
moral
ethical
code
and simply
tossed
them
away
this
poisoned noise
annoying destroys
my self-awareness
chipping away with the
insults you say
that don't just float over my head
and away
to be heard by another
absorbed like a sponge
you lunge and thrust
your mistrust upon
the easily influenced
construed the wrong way
confused
each day I walk
with a lowered head
a downcast gaze
impossible to see
brighter days with
mirrored shades
like sharpened blades
so in my eyes your words reflect the hurt
because words are knives
and knives end lives
so kill or be killed
Comments on "Kill or Be Killed"
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On Monday, January 2, 2006, AHHH
(184) wrote:
absolutely awesome.
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On Sunday, November 21, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
oh dear lord this was amazing! the last three lines drove it all home
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A former member wrote:
This was compelling and brutal. Excellent work, sweets.
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On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
Holy hot damn! Brilliant & Powerful
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
powerful brutaltruth; the last four lines are exceptionally good. your metre and structure never fails to impress; excellent write.
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was so beutifully done! i loved the end... grat write!
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple
(39) wrote:
bad ass shit right here. awesome!
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A former member wrote:
sweat shit! this poem has a flow of it's own and god damn.... god damn
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A former member wrote:
errr... sweet