maybe another night, you and i.

By toy soldier

we had a lot of good times, you and i
even now when i look up towords the sky
it remindes me of,
that one night when you and i...
...
...
thats all i can seem to see
but i can never seem to say good-bye
when i think of you, under that moon lit sky
...
...
all i ever see, is you and i,
under that same damn glowing sky
so here i am,
...
...
i find my self under some sort of dark moon lit sky
defidently not the same, but all i can think of is..
the one night that you and i...
shared the same sky once apon a time.

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© 2006 toy soldier
Published on Monday, February 13, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Friday, January 6, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Amazing! Hello there. Much worthy of POD.. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: "the one night that you and i... shared the same sky once apon a time." this piece was touching Scholar

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Friday, September 26, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    I agree, we miss you!!

  • A former member wrote: very nice, very nice... so tender, so meaningful... the sound gives weight to the sentiment... I like, short but so suggestive, so real.

  • Butterfly On Wednesday, March 14, 2007, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    How is it you are the one person that can make me cry with just a few well written words...you are simply amazing...miss you

  • Six-Out On Thursday, August 24, 2006, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    You need to come back and write more.

  • A former member wrote: Oh, this is just gorgeous.. *smiles* ..so so lovely.. you've touched upon so many emotions and memories in so few words.. these words reach out to each of us, in a different way, I think.. and that's a beautiful thing..

  • A former member wrote: ..being able to dream in another's world..thank you, this is lovely.. i adore this piece in its entirety.. title to finish.

  • Butterfly On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    as always you tear me apart kid...miss you bunches

  • Dissolving Poet On Monday, February 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Wow that was great!

  • A former member wrote: "thats all i can seem to see "but i can never seem to say good-bye when i think of you, under that moon lit sky"- beautifully put..this was mesmerizing.shattering. and completly tragic. wellwritten piece.

  • elisa On Monday, February 13, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    under the same dark ...devasted sky......i'm right there with you.

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