maybe another night, you and i.

By toy soldier

we had a lot of good times, you and i
even now when i look up towords the sky
it remindes me of,
that one night when you and i...
...
...
thats all i can seem to see
but i can never seem to say good-bye
when i think of you, under that moon lit sky
...
...
all i ever see, is you and i,
under that same damn glowing sky
so here i am,
...
...
i find my self under some sort of dark moon lit sky
defidently not the same, but all i can think of is..
the one night that you and i...
shared the same sky once apon a time.

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Published on Monday, February 13, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "maybe another night, you and i."

On Friday, January 6, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Amazing! Hello there. Much worthy of POD..
A former member wrote: "the one night that you and i... shared the same sky once apon a time." this piece was touching
On Friday, September 26, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106) wrote:

I agree, we miss you!!
A former member wrote: very nice, very nice... so tender, so meaningful... the sound gives weight to the sentiment... I like, short but so suggestive, so real.
On Wednesday, March 14, 2007, Butterfly (99) wrote:

How is it you are the one person that can make me cry with just a few well written words...you are simply amazing...miss you
On Thursday, August 24, 2006, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

You need to come back and write more.
A former member wrote: Oh, this is just gorgeous.. *smiles* ..so so lovely.. you've touched upon so many emotions and memories in so few words.. these words reach out to each of us, in a different way, I think.. and that's a beautiful thing..
A former member wrote: ..being able to dream in another's world..thank you, this is lovely.. i adore this piece in its entirety.. title to finish.
On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Butterfly (99) wrote:

as always you tear me apart kid...miss you bunches
On Monday, February 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

Wow that was great!
A former member wrote: "thats all i can seem to see "but i can never seem to say good-bye when i think of you, under that moon lit sky"- beautifully put..this was mesmerizing.shattering. and completly tragic. wellwritten piece.
On Monday, February 13, 2006, elisa (1595) wrote:

under the same dark ...devasted sky......i'm right there with you.