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My Beauty.
By Mute Serenade
My beauty bound
Silk shutters
(tied to the ground)
I chose her
The only one.
My beauty sound
She shall keep away my sadness
I shall protect her from my world.
She shudders
I fall down
(sick with envy).
My beauty (round
About she stammers)
Caught in lies
I have been betrayed
I weep-
She never had a choice.
Heart's deceive their masters
Leaving minds to shatter
Eyelids
Begging for better pictures.
Fragile, I am found-
This burden would never be hers
She screams dependency
Backed with invincibility
Only my eyes
Glaze and widen
At the sight of her thorns.
An army of emotion
Would hold themselves
If she but hid herself from me.
My beauty's luscious
And I am withering away
Writhing
In lies.
She gave me a petal
I gave her everything
(I hid her away).
She is crumpling
(how I hate her)
And I am dying
Without her.
I am bound
Not my beauty
I am flooded
And broken
(she has stripped me of my thorns).
She never chose me
But I would choose her a thousand times over.
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This is to my glass case, the only one who understands it.
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Copyright 2004 Mute Serenade
Published on Thursday, August 3, 2017.
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On Thursday, August 3, 2017, carlosjackal
(3011)
wrote:
Brilliant write...twisting and turning all the while you are burning. Fantastic expression of emotion.
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, sulkylime
(191) wrote:
so fantastic.. who is "she", this she who drains you, while you still hold her tight while your hand is stabbed by her thorns that she doesn't shy away.. while you inevitably shed your own thorns.. she screams and you absorb, you bleed, you hate, you envy
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2004, sulkylime
(191) wrote:
but you cannot live without her.. this is so powerful - i can see your beauty through this..
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Mute Serenade
(445) wrote:
The whole inspiration for this peice was The Little Prince, a book published in the early 1900s... read it sulky, i think you'd like it... this was my take on the story of his rose... read it and you'll get it...
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, sulkylime
(191) wrote:
ahh thank you for telling me - sorry i should've known - i'm quite familiar with the book actually, it's always been one of my fav books - i love the poem all the more bc you expressed such emotion so so well; the prince's love for the rose- that was the
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, sulkylime
(191) wrote:
actual main story of the book don't you think -
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On Saturday, May 15, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
fucking amazing catastrophe . screaming into an empty vase ... echo screaming back without conviction ... drink the water ... taste the life ... too right ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
ewww, Screams in horror, Agony, Im scared
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On Thursday, May 13, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
quite original, and exclaiming in its grueling decay::fallen one::
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