Manslave

By flying_fox

The masks you bring
and make me wear
silk tied with string
lace bustier

stilettos sharp
with pointed toe
straps leaving marks
from suck and blow

gripped flesh not torn
first pink then white
I'll feel reborn
with you tonight

Your lips caress
your voice a tease
sex and prowess
now on my knees

Master says strip
I must obey
lest cane and whip
will find their way

Restraint? no need
you push me down
my lust you feed
slut with no crown

You are my Master
once again
keep fucking faster
pleasured pain

Raw skin red eyes
post-coitus bask
You'll bring disguise
I'll wear your mask

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Copyright 2004 flying_fox
Published on Friday, February 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, November 9, 2006, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    *the dance continues*

  • A former member wrote: holy shit the more of your work that I read the more I like. I'm glad i found this sight. keep up the good work.lol

  • sulkylime On Sunday, April 25, 2004, sulkylime (191)By person wrote:

    hey this looks familiar..... to a fantasy of my own... hehheh

  • A former member wrote: ah-hel-ll.. set a tremor on my breath and a glint in my eye, that.. [note to self: not work reading. co-workers appear edgy.]

  • Mistress Morbid On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Oh gave me flashes of having a collar around my neck. Wonderful write. =) Morb

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    now THAT would make an interesting poem Morb!! Fox

  • girlafraid On Monday, March 29, 2004, girlafraid (479)By person wrote:

    the last line just makes it incredibly perfect and submissive...sometimes you gotta be a little slutty ;)

  • purr_verse On Monday, February 23, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    you're so bad! hehheh. pulsing rhythm and direct, stiletto-pointed rhyme make for a most effective piece here. purr

  • nell On Sunday, February 22, 2004, nell (270)By person wrote:

    mmmmm makes me crave some kinkyness

  • KittyStryker On Sunday, February 22, 2004, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    lovely. very deliciously lovely.

  • birdwell On Saturday, February 21, 2004, birdwell (138)By person wrote:

    damn, what dark, and wonderful things you conceive, great poem ~db~

  • Exodus On Friday, February 20, 2004, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    wow....nice job....i like it alot....nice and hot...lol

  • Lynaes On Friday, February 20, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    I really loved this, graceful withs tons of attitude. A really awesome write. ~L

  • capt_funguy On Friday, February 20, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    intentional , or not , your word choices lend a certain classy air to such a raw encounter ... just a note , if you take away the title , and connect it to the boss one , it really gets crazy .. funguy

  • A former member wrote: lol good catch, that is crazy and a bit scary at the same time. ~Ship!

  • A former member wrote: Why do I have this sudden urge to rub vasaline all over my body and buy plastic sheets?! Great work - very dark..

  • capt_funguy On Friday, February 20, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    hey man ... buy the plastic sheets first ... just a suggestion ... funguy

  • birdwell On Sunday, February 22, 2004, birdwell (138)By person wrote:

    it might be amusing though, walking in the "plastic sheet superstore"(hmmm)?? wearing nothing but a greasy film, and an ungainly expression created by your lips constantly slipping off your teeth!

  • Six-Out On Friday, February 20, 2004, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    *dances*

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, February 20, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    uhhh *dances*

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, February 20, 2004, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    Truely poetic. Wonderful piece. [D&A]


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