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The Rest Of Me
By liquid_emotion
Everything was perfect wrapped up in our love
My knight in shining armor sent from above
But the world had to crumble and someone had to fall
I tried and I cried and I gave you my all
Life was never better than the night I met you
compassionate mysterious honest and true
But hell broke the barrier and crossed human ground
to steal back the only man fate and grace found
I'll never give another soul half that kind of love
never pray for happiness sent from above
But I had my chance and gave in to destiny
never even thought that you'd take the rest of me
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Tuesday, December 9, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, August 7, 2017, SolApathy
(582)
wrote:
...In all my years of being on this site I have never found a poem that has hit me as hard as this one...The emotions portrayed in this work of art go so far beyond the words on the page...Emitting emotion in powerful waves of remembrance and despair--With a deep feeling of love lost in the air..
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A former member wrote:
heart wrenching sad, emotional poem .... excellent write up, very touching
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A former member wrote:
I know the feeling....amazing how the most treasured thing int he world is so deadly to the soul...*sigh* i hope you become inspired again someday.
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On Saturday, May 8, 2004, sixsixnine
(480) wrote:
fucking very cool! *669*
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
Very touching, I totally relate to it.
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, Stranger
(265) wrote:
Nice to have you back. I am very happy to see a new one from you. But I am sorry that it had to be such a sad one.
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1753) wrote:
Good to see a new one from you, meinen Freundin. Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
*sigh* sadness, love... love is a bastard face. poo. beautiful write.
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A former member wrote:
I agree with what bast said....it was very heartfelt by me as well....stired burried emotions....great piece
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
::sighs:: i feel this slide, slow and sadly into my veins... tears fall, down, down into the silence of alone... when you know there is no other like the one you had. mm. well written... unfortunately, very heartfelt.
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
Wow . . this is so sad . . it gave me chills . . god, I miss reading you liquid . . excellent write . . so heart-wrenching . .
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Six-Out
(1437) wrote:
Yes...exactly what she said.
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