2 freewrite

By Jonas

word shaman
bad omen
cloistered slogan
dirty word
mantra
knee bent pasta
fornicator
pessimist
nationalist
republican
the anti-christ among you but the town ain't running out to anybody's aid as wolf has been called too many times
in vain
in vain, in vain, in vain
vein
just a metaphor for other addictions
my vascular system has not been violated by
any no. 12 nest of bees
a white boy can dance
it's not jpretty but i do it
i do it all day
i do it all night
reminds me to smile to fail to follow a lampshade is a witch as it touches the bulb for too long
gutter lovely visions of salem
on plymouth rock
on the western frontier
destiny, manifestiny
where do we go form here
nowhere to hide from the man who can, if it's his will make it all easy
or make life rough toilet paper in a tin can bathroom
cold ass
and insulted whithered constipated
elated sometimes in the small wonders
jack-in-the-box when you've turned the crank for just long enough
you thought it was broken or even a token of what hardwork can do to polish the rough
polish sausages are too much for my stomach and
watchouti'monmywaytothejon

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Published on Saturday, October 18, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "2 freewrite"

A former member wrote: whoa! somehow remindes me of henry rollins but with much more anger...respect.
On Thursday, October 30, 2003, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

a stream of conciousness, unmatched! well done my pescado friend........
On Thursday, October 23, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

I love how that came out - interesting glimpse into an interesting mind. Ciao, T/S
On Monday, October 20, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

Wow, what a swirling, jagging jolt this was, tumbling out of control, love it Dearheart. ~ mw
On Monday, October 20, 2003, Stranger (263) wrote:

Free write or not, this is cohesive, entertaining and just plain fun for the whole family.
On Sunday, October 19, 2003, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

this is fascinating. is it scary that i can make sense out of the delirium, that i can follow it?... O.o
On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

You said Jon....*BOOOOOOYA*
On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Drea (1388) wrote:

yay *does the freewrite dance* ~Drea~
On Saturday, October 18, 2003, WinterGrave (258) wrote:

i need to get drunk and read this, maybe ill understand it better...lol, but i still like it.~~~Grave
On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

nothing really to understand. it was a freewrite.
A former member wrote: Whoooooa trippy.