...Demons caress a sunset sky
By SolApathy
https://youtu.be/f3wfhUuGrP0?t=627
In the broken recesses of a shattered mind
My soul crosses a line
Burdened by the darkness of time
Can’t see a path to redemption
Resigned to knowing I’ll never be whole
What becomes of this battered soul?
Do I take, or do I lose control
Does it matter, as both paths lead to darker deeds?
How on God’s earth did I sow these seeds
I remember the day as your voice faded away
Memories sacrificed to the fog of time
I remember still, our last glass of wine
Words I see but no longer hear
Is it compassion or a curse for these memories to fade
Everyday punished as these thoughts decay
I am the burden of my own mind
A victim of time
Peace I’ll never find
Fearing an endless stream of sunset days
Without you to keep the demons at bay
Soon I’ll visit your grave
Punishing myself for the love I could not save
In the broken recesses of a shattered mind
My soul crosses a line
Burdened by the darkness of time
Can’t see a path to redemption
Resigned to knowing I’ll never be whole
What becomes of this battered soul?
Do I take, or do I lose control
Does it matter, as both paths lead to darker deeds?
How on God’s earth did I sow these seeds
I remember the day as your voice faded away
Memories sacrificed to the fog of time
I remember still, our last glass of wine
Words I see but no longer hear
Is it compassion or a curse for these memories to fade
Everyday punished as these thoughts decay
I am the burden of my own mind
A victim of time
Peace I’ll never find
Fearing an endless stream of sunset days
Without you to keep the demons at bay
Soon I’ll visit your grave
Punishing myself for the love I could not save
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Copyright 2023 SolApathy
Published on Friday, February 17, 2023.
Filed under:
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Author's Note:
...Little is left to be said, as my soul I fear is dead.Comments on "...Demons caress a sunset sky"
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On Saturday, February 18, 2023, The-Ardent
(25) wrote:
In the broken recesses of a shattered mind My soul crosses a line Burdened by the darkness of time Can’t see a path to redemption Resigned to knowing I’ll never be whole What becomes of this battered soul? ^^^ this right here is the good stuff. ?
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On Sunday, February 19, 2023, SolApathy
(667) wrote:
...I appreciate your thoughts.
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On Saturday, February 18, 2023, Poetic-Realm
(258) wrote:
"If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you still have a soul left to lose." - Bukowski
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On Sunday, February 19, 2023, SolApathy
(667) wrote:
...Perhaps, though the question becomes ---Is it a soul that can be saved or is darkness all that remains?
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On Friday, February 17, 2023, LIFEINVADER
(302) wrote:
A heart-wrenching reflection on the struggle with a shattered mind, the burden of memories, and the quest for redemption. Nice one!
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On Friday, February 17, 2023, SolApathy
(667) wrote:
Thank you... I just wish the feelings of despair would fade as her voice has in my mind...