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to my lost love
By Johny_D_Lewis
no tears left, only blood flows
coming out of every pore
screams of pleasure and pain
coming from my mouth
climbing out of my tomb
tired of waiting here
alone without you
escaping this pleasure and pain
looking for the real you
tired of the lies
tired of my visions
just fake illusions of the past
hunting this world alone
looking for you out here
every where and any where
but leading me no where
you're long gone
taken by this world
the ground swallowed you whole
just to spite me and my power
so now i lost you, forever
i fall into my illusions
my visions of pleasure and pain
now left to exist without you.
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Copyright 2003 roachboyman
Published on Monday, September 29, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335)
wrote:
ouch... leaves me with a bitter after-taste and a tinge of sad feel to it. very emotive.
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On Friday, May 7, 2004, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
I just had te love of my life leave for the coast gard...its hard...I know this feeling
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On Saturday, November 1, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a most internal and lonley piece, you have given truthful discription of a great great pain.........well spoken.....urban
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On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
nicely done.
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On Thursday, October 2, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
"the ground shawolled you whole just to spite me and my power" it's sad how we can be so strong and so weak all at once, I like this a lot, i think i know the feeling ~Dawn
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A former member wrote:
Anger, emptyness, lapse satisfaction... I like =)
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
....*sighs* this hit close to home..as all true words do. great write~Drea~
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