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...Savage the Mind
By SolApathy
Savage winds in my mind
…Tired—Can’t seem to find
Strands of the words that once could bind
Catastrophic reality--my chaos exposed
As the world around--- explodes
Tearing you away from within - - You left me alone
…Again…
I slip into your grave a freeze-dried rose
Dreaming if only it could be me
Next to your side for all eternity
--I scream –
-Shatter the walls of a reality I didn’t choose-
Hurricane of my thoughts – betrayed
Breaking beyond the fabric of life that took you
Breaking the world - - My hurricane thoughts of two
Savage the world as retribution for stealing
…You
…Tired—Can’t seem to find
Strands of the words that once could bind
Catastrophic reality--my chaos exposed
As the world around--- explodes
Tearing you away from within - - You left me alone
…Again…
I slip into your grave a freeze-dried rose
Dreaming if only it could be me
Next to your side for all eternity
--I scream –
-Shatter the walls of a reality I didn’t choose-
Hurricane of my thoughts – betrayed
Breaking beyond the fabric of life that took you
Breaking the world - - My hurricane thoughts of two
Savage the world as retribution for stealing
…You
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© 2020 SolApathy
Published on Saturday, August 26, 2017.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
5 minute poem request.... ~Hurricane~Comments on "...Savage the Mind"
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On Sunday, August 27, 2017, Mute Serenade
(445)
wrote:
I wish I could've mustered words so eloquently to capture my own pain, but thankfully you did it for me. This screams of a girl I was after being left... Not so long ago but far enough now not to ever look back... :)
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On Sunday, August 27, 2017, dwells
(4284) wrote:
I wonder if my second wife ever feels this way about my ex - NAH! All's fair...Cheers Sol As for me: eight years was not an eternity, but seemed to be.
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On Sunday, August 27, 2017, SolApathy
(669) wrote:
Lol...Glad you got back that sense of humor of yours!
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On Saturday, August 26, 2017, worm
(1194) wrote:
nicely played! another quality piece... ~worm~
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On Saturday, August 26, 2017, Domenta
(9) wrote:
I really like this and i can understand the feelings well well done for 5 min. request
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A former member wrote:
Thank you for accepting my challenge :). Such a beautifully written hurricane, love. Amazing job as usual. Rebs:).
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On Saturday, August 26, 2017, Allen
(165) wrote:
Nice. Your 5 min poems are always something to read. Nice use of the word
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