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Iconoclast II
By dwells
Once I had my pride
Between lapses of loneliness
Before you blinded me
Like a shaggy Sampson
Each arm encircling an alabaster pillar
At the portico of your pagan temple
Giving you what you need
As the shaking begins
“My God!” – your gasping affirmation
Holding you amongst broken pedestals
In your pantheon of imposters
There are no victims now
Only the dust and us
As the seed implants
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Author's Note:
what she really needs...Comments on "Iconoclast II"
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On Wednesday, November 8, 2017, Cassette
(1144)
wrote:
*sigh* very nice.
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A former member wrote:
You write very well. Awesome piece of writing.
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2017, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
shaggy sampson brought those pillars down with this piece. Love the visual as well as the written word. Great stuff Dan.
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2017, syzygy
(49) wrote:
This is very sad to me. It whispers needs unmet. In my mind it sounds like years of wishing for a release that never came, all a man's dreams turned to dust foremost for a woman's pleasing. Guess that's cause my parents were like that and honestly when they divorced it made me happy. Maybe there's only one life. Makes me think of the movie American Beauty. How he broke out and got free. This meant a lot to me.
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On Monday, March 20, 2017, molock
(314) wrote:
Dan you are a priceless gem my brother .... from the heart, God bless. stunned and speechless - mo
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On Monday, March 20, 2017, Mad Hatter
(13) wrote:
The atmosphere here blends well and makes for a beautiful write indeed.
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A former member wrote:
I can feel the subtle eroticism and romanticism in this write, and it makes me blush just a tiny bit. The seed is planted in more ways than one, my dear Dan. Very lovely indeed. Queen Reb;).
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On Sunday, March 19, 2017, out there
(188) wrote:
Yeah great analogy .. I love the Samson verse.. and the opening verse/3 lines really tells it all. very nice piece
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On Saturday, March 18, 2017, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I am truly a fan. This has such emotion and the visuals are amazing. I'm envious of the way you convey such a punch with not many words. Write on.
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