Father
By Lab Rat
I've always found it odd, that the ones that seem the least complicated
Are those that break the mold, the tired conflicts of what is and should
be
The image I followed, in childlike footsteps, the one to which I am compared
I've asked for so much, and yet so little, please just be proud of me
To Dad...
My father, a man of direct ways and meaning
A quiet wisdom, and a thunder beneath his dramatic baritone
It reverberates, off mountains and clashes the wind of my being
He is stone and iron
I am wind and water, elusive and flowing
To his rough exterior, I am the thing that crashes
Against his jagged cliffs and brusque lashes
I've lived my life, within the shadow of his peaks
Proud and immobile, unyielding and powerful
Its silence in predawn when he speaks
Its marvelous, his storms, his council
The quiet giant that need not anger to emphasize
But his ire is delirious in its size
Sharp to word, truth is a weapon he passed down
But still wields it as a master, not dulled from age
Within its depths one could drown
Truth sets him free, so goes the adage
Is he proud of me?
I certainly may hope, wish for it
Even if I know I've fallen far short of his creed
The simplicity of his nature, the scope of his being
It still baffles me, leaves me breathless
The person he is, has always been the man
I strive, in myself, to conceive
The rock against my wind
The iron before my waters
His disappointment has always been palpable
His praise seldom, but cherished
If only I were capable
Of feeling those things that were nourished
By silence and distance
I would understand more the figure
Whom I've known as hero, through my years
As the man before him, his Elder
The slayer of my childhood fears
The one that taught me to be Father
Comments on "Father"
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On Saturday, April 16, 2016, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Excellent tribute and characterization LR. We can't be besties with the kids or they will run amok, take advantage, and learn everything the hard way. I like what Khalil Ghibran said:"you children are of you, but they will never be you" (paraphrased). Hoping he gets to see this iconic portrait and cheers! - Dan
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A former member wrote:
This was beautiful and so sincere. I actually felt myself tearing up halfway through the poem. It seems your father was a good man. You are extremely lucky to have a father who gave you an example. I on the other hand have a drunk careless father I had to take care of since I was six. Well done!
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A former member wrote:
I wish I could say I knew what it was like to try to live up to a man of such greatness in your eyes. And I was even going to say that once you become a parent you'll realize that he is always proud of you, as are you of your child, but it seems you are a father. So, are you proud of your child? Because your father taught you to be a father and if you ever have doubt that you don't measure up then take a look at your own children and realize you're doing something right by them and your own father :) ok I'll stop babbling, I enjoyed this, it was very brave of you to be so revealing.
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On Monday, February 29, 2016, Drea
(1388) wrote:
This was honest, and raw. It wonder if I would have made my dad proud.
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A former member wrote:
Not only do I appreciate this work, I envy its message. I never had a father figure in my life and I missed it terribly. To read your praise and doubts, never truly shedding the fears of childhood, I can only wish to have known the same experiences. A wonderful work.
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On Monday, February 29, 2016, Tagen
(112) wrote:
Magnificent, outstanding, powerful!! Rock and water - verbal ear/eye candy. I love this one so much. xx