Sizzle Stick

By cadymae


She lived at the point of ignition
as if grey pubes and stained afghans
happened to somebody else

She'd been dragging herself away 
from the Burning house 
since she was 11

Her elbows must be sore by now
but she
         crawled away 
                        continually
from everything

It was a learned behavior
seared deep in her flesh

She would need a blind dog and a crippled boy

before she'd get close to almost right

                    ...And they wouldn't survive.

                    ***
                    
At least demons die with their hosts.
Their banshee wails muffled in the shut-down

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Copyright 2015 cadymae
Published on Wednesday, October 28, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anunnaki On Saturday, January 20, 2018, Anunnaki (18)By person wrote:

    I feel like have seen her before, its like she wants to try but there are no opposite insight. This write is beautiful and deeply painful.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, January 19, 2018, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Much, much, much, much deserved POTD from a wonderful poet.

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, December 3, 2016, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Hard-hitting brilliance here in this work...Love the wording and space given for this work to breathe.

  • soul_versing On Thursday, April 7, 2016, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Excuse me for a brief moment... This is one hell of a read. Scaring left on the inside while bleeding out_ almost lyrically. --So much pain that it's ridiculously haunting. I absolutely adore you cadymae! Scholar

  • Lab Rat On Sunday, January 3, 2016, Lab Rat (124)By person wrote:

    The sheer weight of this is palpable, I felt this, from the scrapes on elbows and knees to the heat of the flame. This is livable

  • A former member wrote: Very powerful.

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