The Mad King's Tower
By Lab Rat
Ascended through tower, steps climbing forever taller
Its structure standing on a desolate field
Its secrets and blame reaching forever farther
Jabbing skyward, an accusatory finger
Screaming shame and blasphemy
At Heaven's falter
Atop the winding stair, towards the throne hall
Wearing the trappings of gloom and denial
Upon ruin sat the King of Fall
His court set for fail
His empire of slow motion
His kingdom of mechanized self exile
The dying of Summer's blaze
His head bowed beneath blame
His crown, known only as shame
Cloaked himself in silence and stone
Watching the glow from atop his spire
As the fields beyond laid razed asunder
His nemeses long gone to bone
As he set their world on fire
His only desire, to watch the world crumble
To dust, beneath the blistering sun
So retreated to solitude, content to be forgotten
Glad with it, the King did revel within
The tower pointing angrily, to the skies above
Brusque and defiant, his kingdom did come
Was this his world to be had?
As he garbed himself in regal wardrobe
Forgotten promises, distant love
Audiences of solace and peace forbad
Stealthed away, his tower of shadow beneath the sun
Left to his own devices...
The wandering poet, the raging nomad
For upon his Throne, locked in his tower
Long ago, the King had gone mad
Comments on "The Mad King's Tower"
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On Monday, December 19, 2016, sIo
(898) wrote:
Sharp and detailed to a point. Very rhythmic and wound well with despair and solitude. I love how it twists its way to the end. Also an interesting rhyme scheme pattern. I like this. Well done :-)
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On Wednesday, November 16, 2016, Anna McCarra
(357) wrote:
This poem got me thinking. It can stand alone as a literal story, and the whole thing can be taken as metaphor as well. I'm drunk, that's all I've got...have this link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFrwi9Mje7E
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On Saturday, June 11, 2016, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
The King's madness... not so mad, upheaval, a hurricane of less than lightly done moments, times. He is stubborn, but he always let his voice be heard. I'd still be a smartass to him anyway.... fyi the tower in the tarot means upheaval and change, a wake up call that change is coming, ready or not.....NOT destruction
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On Saturday, February 13, 2016, Dimensions
(94) wrote:
I agree with what was said by another poet in regards to the whole of your poem standing out. The 5th stanza is my favorite, but from beginning to end this is a great achievement.
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On Saturday, February 13, 2016, Lab Rat
(124) wrote:
thank you very much, I appreciate the compliment, and thank you for reading
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On Saturday, February 13, 2016, Drea
(1388) wrote:
Yer highness... Fine. I told you, this is hands down one of the best I've ever read from you. You take a subject and you spin it into words that are just uniquely you. Some have lines that stand out. The entire thing stands out. One of the best, grumpy. Always.
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On Saturday, February 13, 2016, Lab Rat
(124) wrote:
my biggest cheerleader