Iron Rising
By HeadpatSlut
Iron Rising
Until the day I die, I swear I'll never fall before my fears-
Transform with every passing day, Becoming stronger for my pain and tears-
I've sworn an oath upon the ashes of ones who could not remain-
I'll be reduced to rubble before extinguishing my flames-
Survival is my only option, I can't yet meet Valhalla's gates-
Every single breath I take, feel my existence resonate-
Recovering lost bonds, reinforcing sealed vows-
My blood is dired, but scars don't fade, the only time to live is now-
Remember what I said that day, I stood before the wake-
You ascened from the Pyre as the flames caressed my face-
I promised you that I'd go on, that I'd live long before my grave-
That I'd live for you, to make up for the life you did forsake-
This weight's been lifted off my chest, I can finally breathe-
My muscles burning as my tears fall and dissolve into the sea-
As tattoos upon my skin embrace my lasting cuts-
Restless, rising every day, still driven on by boiling blood-
There's so much more of this world I need to see-
So as of this moment, I'm breaking free-
Because of all my friends, I can't be content while so far gone-
Even if I bleed again, I will embrace the rising Dawn.
Comments on "Iron Rising"
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
This one gave me chuckle (in a good way.) I liked the symbolism of images, it reminded me of The Doors. :)
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A former member wrote:
Holy shit do my eyes deceive me?!? This is fucking amazing. Nice to see new works from you man. Its been a long time. Greatest birthday present ever! :-)
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On Wednesday, September 2, 2015, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
It's good to see you frequenting these parts, again, and returning with a piece like this makes it all the more serendipitous; a piece that can't help but exude an air of triumph upon its recital. Hopefully, this is a sign of more pieces to come.