Iron Rising

By HeadpatSlut

Iron Rising



 



 



Until the day I die, I swear I'll never fall before my fears-



Transform with every passing day, Becoming stronger for my pain and tears-



I've sworn an oath upon the ashes of ones who could not remain-



I'll be reduced to rubble before extinguishing my flames-



 



Survival is my only option, I can't yet meet Valhalla's gates-



Every single breath I take, feel my existence resonate-



Recovering lost bonds, reinforcing sealed vows-



My blood is dired, but scars don't fade, the only time to live is now-



 



Remember what I said that day, I stood before the wake-



You ascened from the Pyre as the flames caressed my face-



I promised you that I'd go on, that I'd live long before my grave-



That I'd live for you, to make up for the life you did forsake-



 



This weight's been lifted off my chest, I can finally breathe-



My muscles burning as my tears fall and dissolve into the sea-



As tattoos upon my skin embrace my lasting cuts-



Restless, rising every day, still driven on by boiling blood-



 



There's so much more of this world I need to see-



So as of this moment, I'm breaking free-



Because of all my friends, I can't be content while so far gone-



Even if I bleed again, I will embrace the rising Dawn.

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Copyright 2015 DK6_Marius
Published on Wednesday, September 2, 2015.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    This one gave me chuckle (in a good way.) I liked the symbolism of images, it reminded me of The Doors. :)

  • A former member wrote: Holy shit do my eyes deceive me?!? This is fucking amazing. Nice to see new works from you man. Its been a long time. Greatest birthday present ever! :-)

  • lupus tenebrae On Wednesday, September 2, 2015, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    It's good to see you frequenting these parts, again, and returning with a piece like this makes it all the more serendipitous; a piece that can't help but exude an air of triumph upon its recital. Hopefully, this is a sign of more pieces to come. Scholar

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