My Promise (sonnet)
By dwells
We frolicked in the sea and laughing waves
You gave yourself to me in waters deep
The tides they turned as sweetly wore our days
But now the time has come for me to sleep
If sleep I must then fondly I shall dream
And dreaming go to places in your heart
To dwell a while beside a votive stream
And linger there before I must depart
But later I’ll withdraw and watch you pine
And smiling as another makes a toast
Then come to you in draughts of cheap red wine
And know we shared the best of any boast
When all is well and you in comfort rest
I’ll guide you home to be with Heaven’s blest
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Copyright 2014 dwells
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely beautiful! Such a delightful ink with a great flow. I love the mention of being in the sea together...doesn't get more romantic than that
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On Monday, December 5, 2016, SolApathy
(652) wrote:
Just read this for the first time... You are a talented writer; heartfelt words in every piece you write. I hope you will write more...
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On Monday, November 17, 2014, Pride Ed
(107) wrote:
Its so beautiful! I love this one a lot. ^_^
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On Friday, October 31, 2014, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Adam - been busy learning this poetry thingy. The fishing is lousy and golfing even worse. Hoping you had a festive Halloween! River Lily - every once in a while I'll use a sonnet to break the monotony of writer's block; works for me, thanks and call me a softie! NS - that closing is always an opportunity to grab the reader's attention, and this was no exception, thanks! Welcome again to DP!
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A former member wrote:
I highly enjoy this work. I've always been a fan of sonnets. I can visualize everything that's going on, and it just makes me happy, but I can sense that there is a saddened tone to the poem. At least that's how I feel when reading it.