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chaos
By Sketso
driving, burning, churning...
these vibrations threaten to free a beast
whose feet have long been locked in concrete
blissful paradise, a world of perfection
isn't powerful enough to serve as a cage,
no matter how many wish they were here.
seems I always want what's not good for me.
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Copyright 2013 Sketso
Published on Thursday, June 8, 2017.
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"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, November 26, 2013, megaprime81
(740)
wrote:
Very nicely done; many can relate to this, and it's nicely composed. 10.
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On Tuesday, November 26, 2013, Hands_Around_My_Throat
(67) wrote:
Interesting. This piece makes it seem like you are in a situation that makes you happy-- you wish you could stifle your desire to seek out more, but forbidden fruit..... tempts.
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On Tuesday, November 26, 2013, Sketso
(416) wrote:
A short poem for ya: Quite the insight. :)
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On Tuesday, November 26, 2013, Hands_Around_My_Throat
(67) wrote:
I like to put myself into a poem, and reap the emotional benefits and deficits. I feel like I've been here too. I just have to wonder if comfort is mistaken for happiness, though.
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On Tuesday, November 26, 2013, Sketso
(416) wrote:
Ahh... muddier of waters, smudger of lines. Taunt me not in my stolid stance! :P
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