My Pen

By Stranger

My pen in my hand
Poised above the paper
Like a man behind a woman

With its stiffness
I begin to press its tip into the page
Your body jerks away
As if from a tattooist's needle
Trembling from its pain and its permanence

I stroke your hair reassuringly and tell you:
"It is only words and ink and fantasy"
Your fingers dig into my thigh
Blessing the progress of my prose

"Where are we now?” you ask
"Alone on an island; the world turning only for us"
"Only for us..." you echo back, steadying your breath
" This will be our story" I continue
"Our story..." your voice slowly cracking

Questions consuming you like a forest fire
Or a virus
I lift my pen to remind you
That this is only words and ink and fantasy
...the infection rages on

The diamonds in your eyes become black pebbles
And fall like the shadows of snowflakes

I watch as your skin and your blood
Turn translucent from doubt and from fear
I see your heart
Pulsing like a jellyfish swimming away from me

Helpless, I can only look on
As you reach out, grasping at nothing
Your form fading from my view

I write the final lines in the air
Letters and ink dropping to the floor
Making no sound

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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Wednesday, August 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Nimue44 On Monday, December 15, 2014, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    Who said writing was a lonely work.

  • Mylissa On Saturday, May 9, 2009, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Oh seduction at its finest. I am tasting this poem. To take such a simple object and make it delicious is a huge talent, I am speechless over your words. Write more please. Yes, this is my favorite. I have to upgrade just to bookmark you. It is well worth it.

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Its as though I am there with you. You've painted a vivid picture for all to see. I love this.

  • blackdarkness On Friday, November 21, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    this made me think....well done...

  • KittyStryker On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    i can't say much about this, except i love it, i feel it, and i have tears in my eyes... i have a grasp of this, and these words... i feel like i've been there, or am there, or am i? i'm not even making sense. anyway... i love it.

  • _Andrew_ On Monday, August 25, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    beautiful, brings back many painful memories, and yes :D i write with a pen to hehe *~*aNDReW*~*

  • OLd SouL On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    fantastic display of words.. great write

  • SnowQueen On Friday, August 15, 2003, SnowQueen (59)By person wrote:

    .........whoa..... how sexy, how well written, how inspiring.... this is amazing. One giant metaphor that pulls you deeper and deeper with each word. I love this.

  • Jonas On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    breathless he owns the world in so far as much as he can wrap himself around it and she comes for the ride comes through the night to feed with him at the trough of creation and violation and everything that can come borne of the soul and dirty sheets

  • maddin foxxxy On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    The ending is my absolute favorite part of the poem.."Letters and ink dropping to the floor Making no sound"....i am also fond of the great metaphor you developed so delicately.

  • Ophelia On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    this pulls you in expecting more, and then it ends, very nice...........O.

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