The rat and the piece of cheese

By M Morgan

gnawing me
tiny, tiny
as a mouse to a piece of cheese
small, insistently
inside me

as if I had
sin
as if I'd blame
as if I was wrong...

there... aching...
trying to annoy me
not letting me sleep

gnawing me ...
the rat and the piece of cheese
inside my chest

and Iam bursting
this feelings
here outside.

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Published on Thursday, April 4, 2013. Filed under: "Graphic Art"

Author's Note:

I think that happens with the others too. A feeling inside. And i just wanted sleep!

Comments on "The rat and the piece of cheese"

On Saturday, April 6, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

wonderful pen M! I know how this feels when I want to write a poem and I can't express what my heart is feeling! awesome
On Monday, April 8, 2013, M Morgan (198) wrote:

We are equals in feelings poetess! The difference is i dont have your strength,
On Saturday, April 6, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

This was very well expressed in an artful and subtle way, that unites many who suffer here. Congratulations on finding that elusive, common thread and much enjoyed (next time I'll bring crackers)! Cheers MM.
On Saturday, April 6, 2013, M Morgan (198) wrote:

You can bring pizza too. They say that is good. Thanks Poet
On Friday, April 5, 2013, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

that's an apt description, a living thing inside you , gnawing...
On Friday, April 5, 2013, M Morgan (198) wrote:

well, it could be anything nicer!! But is the stubborn rat gnawing cheese.
On Thursday, April 4, 2013, Devilish (2633) wrote:

I think i love you ...
On Thursday, April 4, 2013, M Morgan (198) wrote:

I love you too Poetess! Thanks