she speaks myth by the fireside(i caught a glimpse)
By Jonas
lands pathless
invisible
to two eyes naked
she scrapes
the protestant spurs
of my bones to produce
pixie dust
follows the solemn
rhythm
she does break dance
heathen
ritual to kiss
the distance
between
much greater than can
be conquered
by internal combustion
a dervish
she told me the story
of how
she had once managed
to kiss the sky
said i reminded her
of the time
goodbye kiss
left
in turn
some of it on my lips
adieu
she wore a flowing coat
open over
white skin
naked
held pictures of things
celestial written
i sometimes remember
with
waking eyes open
what was written
there
midnight rain a slow roll
of lollygag thunder
larger than life
mythe absence in substance
moisten
the pores
of the sandman clogged
in reminiscent cognition
finally
they open
he come
sometimes while waking
walking in a
head aching
snare drum roll like sub machine gun
exacerbating hemingway’s fishing line trembling
at the point of breaking
my mind
hot butter
oppressive nature of water
drowning
somewhat
watching earthworm crawl in the rain damp sand
i paint images
the underside of optic nerves crawling with
ants that worship tim and andy
not quite visible
slightly palpable
he speaks of things that will be
in whispers
but sings of things forgotten
once washed away
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Comments on "she speaks myth by the fireside(i caught a glimpse)"
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A former member wrote:
Truly a masterpiece. I like the feminine part, the sandman was trippy. 10
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On Wednesday, July 30, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Nice catching this glimpse with you - I miss you and your outstanding pieces. Ciao, T/S
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
wow...you are jst... there are no words to descibe the depth of your talent and insight and ability to reach through my monitor into my chest grab my heart and my soul giving them a good shake screaming.....WAKE UP
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A former member wrote:
this piece just captured me... I felt like I was in another world. Beautiful. Beautiful.
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
amazing...to the favorites you go...
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
i'm surprised i haven't commented on this yet... it's beautiful... as always, wistful... brings tears to eyes that miss your poetry and your kiss.
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
Like French, a language I do not understand, but can still wholly appreciate the beauty of, your mysterious words stand alone as art. But even more than just gorgeous words here, you unlock within my mind ancient truths and rapture.
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
It was like a dream with a narrator.
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Clementine
(121) wrote:
like crawling inside a vacuum take, i was woed
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, nell
(270) wrote:
ohhhhh you finished it! i like the refrance to absinthe because reading this piece does make me feel almost an absinthe buzz, this pieces leaves me with the feeling that you get after experiencing a mystifying dream, excellent job;)
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On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Oww hard for me. I feel humble. Hah easy to make me that way. But what i understood i truely liked. And the flow in that made my mind smile. Big smileys :)
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On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
*releases a breath held long in respectful silence* . . . wow . . surely this must be some ancient great . . this is poetry that etches itself into the stone walls . . never to be erased . . utterly amazing. Truly.
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On Monday, August 11, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
The parts that I can read are truely beautiful.
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On Monday, August 11, 2003, Loomer
(11) wrote:
Great to see something from you again. This was absolutly wonderful, each line made me think of so many things...great job.
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On Sunday, August 10, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
As always, this spins ever deeper, revealing more and more of its beauty.