Our Auntie Maggie

By Stephanie Sideways

Our Auntie Maggie used to sit
On winter evenings she would knit
No sooner was one garment done
She'd go and start another one
Selected from her knitting kit

She'd always have a candle lit
The gentle light it did emit
Was how it was when she was young
Our Auntie Maggie

Our Uncle Dave worked down the pit
He'd come home late covered in shit
There'd always be a warm bath run
Poor sod, he barely saw the Sun
She loved him so, the silly git
Our Auntie Maggie

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Copyright 2013 Stephanie Sideways
Published on Monday, February 25, 2013.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

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  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    i'll have to look ito roundels, elegant style it seams, thanks for sharing Scholar

  • dwells On Monday, February 25, 2013, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Auntie Maggie and Uncle Dave sound like somebody in all our family trees. Wondering what happened when that candle winked out? Marvelous and tenderly wrought, thanks Stephy

  • Stephanie Sideways On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Yes. I think they still 'did it' ( In my head anyhow ) and I think they liked the candle lit. ;-) Pretty sure Uncle Dave scrubbed up alright!

  • FadedBlues On Monday, February 25, 2013, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    ...sweet poem, & brinds to mind 'my sweet old etcetera aunt lucy' (E E Cummings)...

  • Stephanie Sideways On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    I shall look it up. Would love to sit down and natter to you about your fav poems. You seem familiar with a few of the oldies. .....

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