Two words!

By M Morgan

Two words!

A priest told me

that Latim is a christian language

a chill on my spine
so cold....

My dearest friend so worried

about religion
in two

i was fold

your always bold daughter

have heard the priest too
and now
she is taking her blue

But priest!

latim is a feast to my eyes!
and i used it only two times!

Benedictum Est? Oh! my daughter!

And Cris
my sweet friend

we have to keep stillness
as they say...
nothing like a forgiveness

for the blues drops in rain!

AMEN!

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Copyright 2013 M Morgan
Published on Sunday, February 24, 2013.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • BetaWolfinVA On Wednesday, February 27, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    beautiful picture, beautiful work... wonderful Scholar

  • dwells On Monday, February 25, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Just read this again and I'm still not sure if blue refers to "the blues" (sadness). Also, the priest figure and your friend Chris (could this be code for "Christ"?) - nevertheless there is a secret being kept and the priest seems to be a major player. We all have our secrets; some more than others, cheers!

  • M Morgan On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, M Morgan (198)By person wrote:

    Dear Dwells Religion is not salvation. When one fully embraces and believes he is changed or saved by words. This person is lost! and away from himself. You must believe in yourself and get their own experiences. Believe but think, believe but doubt. Blues here refers to anti-depressants to mitigate the word "priest".

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, February 24, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...poetry is spoken in all languages. I enjoyed the blue raindrops...

  • Devilish On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Wow! totally brutally beautifully written darling. Scholar

  • dwells On Sunday, February 24, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    I 'm sure you'd enjoy reading the works of Corinthian, much in common maybe. Thanks MM and keep writing lady!

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