Dare with me!
By M Morgan
Dare with me!
Give me your hands
and I'll want more than caress
If you dare
give me a hug
Oh! I'll do more than a hug
Keep counting!
The enormous things that
i want to do with you!
Give me a kiss, Now!
and i want more, more than a kiss
Oh! What i want to do!
with your lips and tongue
inside your mouth
Absorbinb your saliva
and joke with your membrana
walk and walk
dance and dance
my tongue on yours
Even provoking a collapse
Now, you are completely
lost, cant do anything.
Wants more?
Glue on me like I in you
and hold me
I'll say to you dirty things
whispering and gasping
I know, you love that!
Oh! give me your entire love
And i will do more than love with you
I will turn you inside out
and tell you words in portuguese
Just for you!
cross through your entire body
with my dance, OH!
I'll get you wet and dry
at same time
And you'll ask to yourself
one second just, is rain or wind
The truth, my lov
IS
i went through you
inside you and so strong
You did not see
Accept that and dont want know why
All this gift is for me and for you and
because you dare with me
And showed to me your face
Oh! Count again! !
Author's Note:
Hummmm!!!!Gooood!!!Comments on "Dare with me!"
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On Friday, January 11, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
You always put a smile on my face, and this time a very big one for sure! Your writing is oddly enchanting, thanks MM! Can't wait for the next one! Hot and dry indeed...
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On Thursday, January 10, 2013, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
Very inticing read.. Dance on through the essence of awesomeness! 10/10
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On Thursday, January 10, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
This things are happen now.is not time to be lost. You must have rushed with the words for not lose the horny.
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On Thursday, January 10, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...'how do I love thee, let me count the ways.' this adds up to a thrilling read...
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On Thursday, January 10, 2013, Electric-Chair
(121) wrote:
Its Ok, Wish it had a better flow, good idea and style
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A former member wrote:
Awesome. It was very weird reading. The whole style and just how transitions went were weird. I love the style and transitions though. I feel as if it just kind of breaks up the poem without stanza use, even though you used them. I absolutley loved the poem though.