Fascination!!!

By M Morgan

If god ask me about my sins
I have to say yes look for my skin
All the time wet for me and for him
love dwells on me

So i ask to him!
Love is my sin?
One way to put me on suffering
here I pay , here inearth my trespass

Oh my God!
give me a sip of no love
intoxicate me of seven sins
Angry, greed, perhaps i'll should be free
Lust i already have within
dont worry about
and put on your list
love of me is the eighth grin
My only fascination ,my love for him

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Copyright 2012 M Morgan
Published on Saturday, December 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Sunday, December 9, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Some guys have all the luck! This was a bit offbeat but it soon grooved into an original and sexy trip into your world of wonder, marvellous!

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, December 9, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...proud conversation. if love were a sin, we would all be doomed to Hell...

  • M Morgan On Saturday, December 8, 2012, M Morgan (198)By person wrote:

    Thanks girls, i love comments of women so real and strong,. Dont forget i am brazilian and have not your skins in english. Thanks beautifuls women.

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, December 8, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    wow this is awesome! the flow is spot on

  • A former member wrote: This was an awesome poem that really fit together nicely. I love the concept of love being a sin when love is what Christianity is ultimately based on. Wonderful job! I think that the form was a bit odd and some of the stanzas should have been combined but other than that it was wonderful.

  • Devilish On Saturday, December 8, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Totally the perfect title.. hello there you and love to see you post.. Scholar

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