B A C K...into.. T H 3.... d3pths
By terris crimson
you said you lov3d m3,
you told m3 3v3ry day,
but th3n I found out,
about you and h3r,
did you hon3stly think I wouldn't discov3r,
that you w3r3 3xploring t3rritory that was not yours,
th3r3 ar3 just c3rtain lin3s,
y
o
s
u.......................................................................................h
o
u
l
d
NOT cross,
y3t you did,
you fuck3d h3r,
an ugly, stupid, nasty slut,
you chos3 h3r ov3r
m3,
y3t you say that you lov3 m3,
and that you still want m3 not h3r,
but you fuck3d h3r so obviously
you want3d h3r,
l3t m3 ask you was it worth it,
som3on3 who trully lov3d you,
lost as anoth3r tradgity,
ov3r a quick fuck,
just a t3mporary toy for your amus3ment,
sh3 will n3v3r lov3 you,
and sh3 will n3v3r b3 with you,
was it worth it,
on3 fuck with a loos3 pussy,
just for a lif3 of lon3lin3ss,
and d i s s a p o i n t m 3 n t,
so
down
into
the
depths
you
go
again,
and now I r3aliz3 that you put yours3lf th3r3 in th3 1st
place,
you d3s3rv3 to b3 th3r3,
hav3 fun,
I hop3 th3 STD's
ar3 fun,
and a brok3n heart, not 1 but 2,
I hop3 tha nasty bitch
was worth it, what goes around comes around.
Awards
Comments on "B A C K...into.. T H 3.... d3pths"
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2018, sTr8-jAcKeT
(697) wrote:
It's a darkened, lonely path. You nailed the logic behind it too, kudos!
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, devilsrighthand
(27) wrote:
So deep... Don't worry, you will find someone better then him, there is no doubt
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, sexxykiller14
(38) wrote:
so true. things will get better for you , sooner or later. just keep ur head up and don't sink down to his level. he's not worth it.
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
The formating of the poem is great and I like the 3 idea as well symbolizing the 3 way effect. Just remember there plenty of fish in the sea.
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On Monday, November 28, 2011, Idsight
(11) wrote:
Interesting use of the three's.. It definitely adds emphasis to the line where you don't use them. I got the impression that everything this person did affects three people.. but the line without the three's is all him. HE will go down to the depths, and it's no one's fault but his own.
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On Monday, November 28, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Damn it my comment got erased on accident.. This here is why I say "Fuck Love!".. Bastard ... Hmmmm... And you so beautiful.. Fuck him!! And feed him fish! By the way I think you have found your new trade mark with th3 number there.. Nice....
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, terris crimson
(167) wrote:
maybe so ^^
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A former member wrote:
this would have been a lot more enjoyable without the 3's for e's. not bad though.