The Real Me

By Invisibledarkness

Pain raining,

Like feathers falling from a broken-hearted angel,

Hurt being hidden,

Whether from me or from you,

I cannot decide,

Can you see the hurt past the smile?

The broken-heart past the cheerful eyes?

Maybe you can,

Maybe you can't.

But one day you'll see...

The real me.

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Copyright 2011 Invisibledarkness
Published on Wednesday, July 27, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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My first poem on the site
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  • A former member wrote: We can't keep our true essence suppressed for long. That is, just the way it is. But as a defense mechanism we absolutely have to hide who we are and only share ourselves with the people we love. There are consequences for that sort of thing. Nice piece.

  • A former member wrote: so melancholy but very beautiful also... like feathers falling from a broken hearted angel ..

  • Devilish On Wednesday, August 31, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Had to read again... lovely! Scholar

  • ColorMeToxic On Saturday, August 27, 2011, ColorMeToxic (240)By person wrote:

    That was beautiful. Scholar

  • Devilish On Thursday, July 28, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Yes this is nice... Welcome to DarkPoetry... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: NICE!!!! i can definatly relate i wish u luck on the site!!! Scholar

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