Their Poem.
By Fantecstasy
Does this heart still beat in your dead chest?
The broken vein-
The sallow bone,
It would take a navigator,
Or an autopsy,
To know you,
Catalogue your faces,
[And envy the man
Who has brushed his fingers along any of them]
This cadaver seems to thrive
On art and alcohol,
[Splendour is optional
Taste is mandatory]
If only the juices of nudity,
And melody,
Stopped dripping from your chin,
The cesspool in your wake,
Might dry,
Yet you go on,
Pastel stained,
Ihr lacheln ist heimlich,
Comme un oeil de cire,
And a tongue of sharp wick,
Just waiting to ignite.
But still I'll call you
Lovely,
As the nothing
That compares to you.
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To save you the trip to a translator:
"Ihr lacheln ist heimlich" (Your smile is familiar/secretive/uncanny)
"Comme un oeil de cire" (Like an eye of wax)
Author's Note:
One poem for you, as promised.Comments on "Their Poem."
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On Friday, March 6, 2015, Dismalmind
(26) wrote:
Great work indeed, seems that she's dead to you, but you're not dead to her.
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2011, carlosjackal
(2786) wrote:
So many brilliant colours to this wonderful dedication..Fantastic stuff.
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A former member wrote:
wow. I cant really add anything to what's already been said but... wow. impressive work.
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A former member wrote:
Truly a poetic achievement... it is a strange thing...tendrils of dark and almost loathsome admiration wrap and coil themselves like wisps of smoke that disappear as faintly as they came to be... but you can still pinpoint the traces of origin, track their devastation clearly, the places touched most profoundly and even those affected almost insignificantly...in the same way, you've brought such life into these words, so that they bleed very humanly... i find magic in the contradiction... it's exquisite. bravo.
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On Wednesday, January 26, 2011, TheProphetUntold
(160) wrote:
A cadaver that smiles and leaves a wake of pestilence. Very cool vision and metaphor. A worthy tribute and work. Very cool. +tpu+