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Sad to see you smile.
By Iwas
Still you miss me.
never letting go completely.
No room to move
freely.
All decisions made discretely.
feably.
Treat
me like dirt.
With other fools you flirt.
Remember that way you
used to eat sherbert?
Fucking pervert.
I want you to know
I miss you to.
Like a bad case of the flu.
You need to get a
clue.
So good bye..So long...ACHOOO.
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Copyright 2009 Iwas
Published on Sunday, November 15, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
Not sure about what kind of person you were writing but love the turn of phrase :)
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On Saturday, September 29, 2012, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
ah yes. those people are my.fucking favorite.... cleverly expressed, as always:)
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Wow, another delicious treat here, you write with great flow, something I'm found of myself. THanks again for yet another lovely piece =)
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On Saturday, November 27, 2010, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
aw absolutely adorable =] sad ...but taste sweet
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A former member wrote:
Lmao! too funny , i loved it ! thanks for sharing :)
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A former member wrote:
Simple but very meaninfull i like this thanks 4 the write
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On Thursday, January 7, 2010, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
Catchy. I like it. Raw, but to me most of the best poems are. Thankyou :)
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A former member wrote:
Nice write. I honestly enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing. =)
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On Monday, November 16, 2009, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...for someone that talks their own work down, you've come up with some pretty nifty ideas...
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On Tuesday, November 17, 2009, Iwas
(39) wrote:
Thanks man. i do tend get a little hard on myself sometimes.
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On Sunday, November 15, 2009, sIo
(926) wrote:
i read this poem. then i went to your profile and read it and decided i'd leave a comment and say: this is pretty darn cute.
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