Honey.Bee

By Sin

Such a clever little creature
Flitting about in your striped dress
And pointy shoes, what sweetness
Hides your anger, as the world tilts
Around your buzz and pollinated lips

I just wish
Your tongue came with less of a sting

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Published on Friday, May 22, 2009. Filed under: "Poetry"

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May 3rd, 2013

Comments on "Honey.Bee"

A former member wrote: Not too much. Just enough. Nice tease.
On Friday, May 3, 2013, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Still a wonderful classic..Richly deserved Poem Of The Day and fits this May weather perfectly :)
A former member wrote: very nice. i enjoyed reading you poem
A former member wrote: Hmm, interesting work. Left me pondering the true meaning behind your words, but had no issue with painting a mental image for me
On Monday, June 22, 2009, unspeakable truth (94) wrote:

Wonderful write, I really enjoyed this...
A former member wrote: i love this. great play o words.
On Sunday, May 24, 2009, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Awww I love this, so simple yet so intense. I enjoy every piece of you...and your writing.
On Sunday, May 24, 2009, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

ah this is so not how i was thinking it would be from the title and from you... that said, light and yet hard at the same time, it causes a knowing grin and a long sigh.... you rock babe
On Sunday, May 24, 2009, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Actually saw a bee in the park collecting pollen from a flower the day you posted this...Brilliant write. *leaves rampant rabbits*
A former member wrote: clever, clever -if i'm guessing correctly =D Either way, it's a very well crafted piece. so glad youre posting again :)
A former member wrote: Well said.
On Friday, May 22, 2009, The Lipstick Factor (287) wrote:

Delightful little piece. Having been stung yesterday--seems judicious timing to read about the little critters. Well done.
On Friday, May 22, 2009, Sketso (416) wrote:

THIS... I can relate to. Friggin' sting. Nicely written, easy to read, yet still quite a bit to ponder.
On Friday, May 22, 2009, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

This is a sweet little ode, with big smarts. I keep wondering what it's about, really. Cute, serious toward the end. Fun read, darlin. You awake now? :)
A former member wrote: Sweet poem!