Open Casket
By Mylissa
I look at him.
As the silk ensnares
alabaster skin, captured by
the glacial body of a caterpillars lungs.
A breath lost, frailty.
mortality. leaving the black roots
of broken lids that are cast in turpentine despair.
Frail so fine,
with lithesome arms bent like
the heart mauled from the beauty of a ballerina.
He still lays motionless,
in hopes I will crawl beneath
his skin and make him warm again.
Porcelain are his eyes
grasping between veiling feathers,
crystallized over the begging of a candles wax.
And petals fall
inside the blue-laced chalice
where his pretty lips touched romance.
As crocheted dreams
rupture along the stained
wings of an angels spine.
My tongue can
taste the alpine hills
that nestle across his ivory vessels,
left... I mourn in his honey-dipped pupils.
And I have starved my
finger-tips to the depth of his death,
fasting in the purity of merciless holy water.
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Comments on "Open Casket "
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Excellend write..thanks for sharing this. well done
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A former member wrote:
Truly a chilling and enchanting write.
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2010, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Beautiful piece filled with wonderful imagery. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Wow.... This is inspiring! Truly deep and captivating!
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A former member wrote:
Truly gravitating! Your words and well-tailored language draws your audience in!
Much appreciation for this!
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A former member wrote:
Could you give me some of your genius please?? You don't need that much!!!
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On Wednesday, June 24, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
lol...you've got plenty of your own...so get writing Mr. raskal!! :}
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On Tuesday, June 2, 2009, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
Masterpiece ~ I Love Every Moment of it ~669~
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A former member wrote:
A beautiful crossing,...to be longed and mourned in the one motion,... to rise above the ache alone and embrace not only the reality of the now, but the life lived and all its p.leisures,...self preservaton left your eyes and and payed homage to the time spent,...a heightened outlook you possess,...very nice.
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On Saturday, May 23, 2009, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
Death made beautiful...I always find myself reading your pieces a few times to get the full picture of the metaphors...and every time I read them I fall deeply in love with your work...This piece especially...loved it.
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On Thursday, May 21, 2009, openureyes
(55) wrote:
...'in hopes i will crawl beneath his skin and make him warm again' this brings tears to my eyes. powerful write.
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A former member wrote:
my thoughts for this are caught inside the ruined chrysalis of your words...scathingly hot and spoken with a predatory detachment that was so agonizingly lovely.
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A former member wrote:
am I the only one reading this from a predator/prey standpoint? sheesh. *looks up yellow pages for local therapists*
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On Thursday, May 21, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
lolol I got therapy for you.."come to my office lil girl" hehehe :oP
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On Thursday, May 21, 2009, Enough
(17) wrote:
Though it is sad to lose someone, the way that you used these words to describe this man in the casket is beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss and hope all is well for you. Great write.
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On Thursday, May 21, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
"the glacial body of a caterpillars lungs." Hell yes! I love the imagery. This is one of my favorites from you for sure. I'm feelin it.
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On Thursday, May 21, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
PS. Please don't mistake my enthusiasm for the way you expressed this subject as flippancy towards the sadness one feels when losing someone.
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On Thursday, May 21, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Thank you for caring, I never once took it the wrong way...poetry is about expression and I am happy to get that expression from you. :)
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On Monday, June 1, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
May your loss fly away like a butterfly and dwell within your atmosphere happily forever.