Open Casket

By Mylissa

I look at him.

As the silk ensnares
alabaster skin, captured by
the glacial body of a caterpillars lungs.

A breath lost, frailty.
mortality. leaving the black roots
of broken lids that are cast in turpentine despair.

Frail so fine,
with lithesome arms bent like
the heart mauled from the beauty of a ballerina.

He still lays motionless,
in hopes I will crawl beneath
his skin and make him warm again.

Porcelain are his eyes
grasping between veiling feathers,
crystallized over the begging of a candles wax.

And petals fall
inside the blue-laced chalice
where his pretty lips touched romance.

As crocheted dreams
rupture along the stained
wings of an angels spine.

My tongue can
taste the alpine hills
that nestle across his ivory vessels,

left... I mourn in his honey-dipped pupils.

And I have starved my
finger-tips to the depth of his death,
fasting in the purity of merciless holy water.

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© 2009 Mylissa
Published on Thursday, May 21, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Wednesday, December 7, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    Excellend write..thanks for sharing this. well done

  • A former member wrote: Truly a chilling and enchanting write.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, August 3, 2010, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Beautiful piece filled with wonderful imagery. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Wow.... This is inspiring! Truly deep and captivating! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Truly gravitating! Your words and well-tailored language draws your audience in! Much appreciation for this! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Could you give me some of your genius please?? You don't need that much!!! Scholar

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, June 24, 2009, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    lol...you've got plenty of your own...so get writing Mr. raskal!! :}

  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, June 2, 2009, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    Masterpiece ~ I Love Every Moment of it ~669~

  • A former member wrote: A beautiful crossing,...to be longed and mourned in the one motion,... to rise above the ache alone and embrace not only the reality of the now, but the life lived and all its p.leisures,...self preservaton left your eyes and and payed homage to the time spent,...a heightened outlook you possess,...very nice.

  • Narcissa On Saturday, May 23, 2009, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    Death made beautiful...I always find myself reading your pieces a few times to get the full picture of the metaphors...and every time I read them I fall deeply in love with your work...This piece especially...loved it.

  • openureyes On Thursday, May 21, 2009, openureyes (56)By person wrote:

    ...'in hopes i will crawl beneath his skin and make him warm again' this brings tears to my eyes. powerful write.

  • A former member wrote: my thoughts for this are caught inside the ruined chrysalis of your words...scathingly hot and spoken with a predatory detachment that was so agonizingly lovely.

  • A former member wrote: am I the only one reading this from a predator/prey standpoint? sheesh. *looks up yellow pages for local therapists*

  • Mylissa On Thursday, May 21, 2009, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    lolol I got therapy for you.."come to my office lil girl" hehehe :oP

  • Enough On Thursday, May 21, 2009, Enough (17)By person wrote:

    Though it is sad to lose someone, the way that you used these words to describe this man in the casket is beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss and hope all is well for you. Great write.

  • ALBATROSS On Thursday, May 21, 2009, ALBATROSS (197)By person wrote:

    "the glacial body of a caterpillars lungs." Hell yes! I love the imagery. This is one of my favorites from you for sure. I'm feelin it.

  • ALBATROSS On Thursday, May 21, 2009, ALBATROSS (197)By person wrote:

    PS. Please don't mistake my enthusiasm for the way you expressed this subject as flippancy towards the sadness one feels when losing someone.

  • Mylissa On Thursday, May 21, 2009, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    Thank you for caring, I never once took it the wrong way...poetry is about expression and I am happy to get that expression from you. :)

  • ALBATROSS On Monday, June 1, 2009, ALBATROSS (197)By person wrote:

    May your loss fly away like a butterfly and dwell within your atmosphere happily forever.

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