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SITTING HERE THINKING
By Johny_D_Lewis
I'm just sitting here thinking
Thinking about the choices I've made
Do I over crowd the ones that I care about
Do I over do every thing
I'm so tired, I can't sleep
I just sit up and think
Do I drive people away from me
Do I make the same mistakes over and over again
I feel so dark and empty
It makes me sit up and think
Am I so lonely
Am I all alone
I just want to cry
As I sit here and think
What's wrong with me
Why am I good enough
I always try
When I sit and think
Do others feel this way
Or am I the only one
I feel so cold
When I sit and just think
Am I really cursed
Will I always have bad luck
I just sit and wonder
As I think so deep
Why do I even try
What is the point to this
No answer come to my mind
But I still sit here think
I don't know why
I don't want to think any more
It hurts to face it all
It hurts to just think
No more, no moreI don't want to think any more.
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Copyright 2003 roachboyman
Published on Thursday, May 15, 2003.
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Comments on "SITTING HERE THINKING"
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On Friday, October 31, 2003, blackdarkness
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wrote:
I said the same thing yesterday...I wish you could just stop thinking....be at peace
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, Audrey_Star
(26) wrote:
I liked it...the scattered rhyming was interesting and kept me reading. The matching of form to content was impressive . . . clever. the sentiment is understandable, most people can relate to at least one, if not all, of these questions. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
That is some very deep thinking..but sometimes..thinking is all we can do. I hate the "what ifs". Nicely done. thx ~evil_bitch~
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On Saturday, May 31, 2003, Rachel
(210) wrote:
More often than not, the only thing you can do is ask yourself 'Why' and 'what if'... The world would be more tolerable if no such question existed.
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On Thursday, May 15, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
sad poem..but ur definetly not the only one...and yes thinking only make it worse.
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A former member wrote:
it hurts just to think....
yes, it does, and this shows it. it's sad but true, and also a sad write, but a good one
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