Stranger and the Snow Queen

By Stranger

A stranger wanders an alabaster desert of winter
In search of a snow queen

The earth asleep beneath a thick, white blanket
Resting for the labors of spring

He walks among leafless trees of gray and black
Outlining where tender, green life has been
and will be again

His legs heavy, he stops
He watches feather crystals of ice
Stack themselves upon bony branches
Like sand in an hour-glass

With each grain that falls
He feels his skin harden
And his heart slow

Cold begins to creep into his muscles
Turning them to brittle stone

His eyes freeze into black ice
But he can still see

He can still see as she approaches

He tries to reach out to her
But, collapsing under the weight of what he has become,
He begins to shatter from the inside

First, icy marrow and bone
Then blood chilled to glass
and skin cracking like the surface of a frozen pond

A million red splinters mingle with snow flakes
As they fall to the ground
To become a part of her kingdom, forever












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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Friday, April 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • 10 Forty Three On Friday, October 7, 2016, 10 Forty Three (593)By person wrote:

    I loved the imagery in this one. Also, it had a very interesting ending. Well done. - 10:43

  • Morbid_insanity On Thursday, October 2, 2008, Morbid_insanity (75)By person wrote:

    i love the imagery in this. its a nice medium between that wintery scene and time. (even the parallels between the winter and dessert imagery). its a wonderful piece

  • Mistress Morbid On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Reminds me of back in the day when I used to role play...I love it..

  • IceDragoness On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, IceDragoness (195)By person wrote:

    Wow... I felt pain as you described the body freezing and breaking >.< oh this is so good! I love it.. I hope I never hurt anyone like that ~Dawn

  • A former member wrote: This is beautiful. I could imagine the scene in my head as the poem unfolded. Good job.. :)

  • Seraphic On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    hm, this was by far the most interesting poem I've read. A dark fairytale...very nicely done

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    very different... I liked.

  • SnowQueen On Friday, April 18, 2003, SnowQueen (59)By person wrote:

    I love it! But I already told u that & why... thanks.

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, April 19, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    sad but yet romantic....a ..yeah

  • KittyStryker On Friday, April 18, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    beautiful and tragic... a faery tale, indeed.

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