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torn pages of persuasion [longing for the cure]
By Six-Out
hell.o - my empty /dreams
it.s good to see you.re still broken
t.i.m-e heals _no wounds/ simply:
paints over the scratches- and hopes no one looks too close
or they.ll see the- [fault lines] of hope
.or what once could have been perceived as such
gentle_melancholia - pro-rated to a tomorrow of lost desire
as .ink. runs down a ;white page of romance
[this] is me- and it.s too much
.-because I just can.t take it
when two/morrow fin.ally comes
look for -me. that figment of your imagination
in the corners of your mind
may.be I.ll be there
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Copyright 2004 Six-Out
Published on Monday, October 11, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
Each time I read this, it still reads the same...you appear as fragmented as this is is typed. It's saddening.
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A former member wrote:
farking awesome, awesome! i have such a strong relation to this peice. insta-fav . *does a fuck yeah dance*
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A former member wrote:
this is sad. and gorgious in its own way. you pixilated pain and gave it your all, and it came out so... so... fuck i cant even find the words to describe how beautiful this is, as i say with all of your work. this is why i choose to adore you. *huggles*
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, Whisper
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wrote:
I have nothing to say. ~Whisper~
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On Monday, October 11, 2004, Ravenblade
(313) wrote:
amazing six, I always look for new stuff by you, and you never let me down, awesome job as usual....I loved the first stanza the best...>Raven
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On Monday, October 11, 2004, Dommi
(96) wrote:
I don't think I've identified so well with any of your other works, but this also breaks my heart to read. There are hundreds of cliche comments I can place here, but all I can say is I want things to get better for you, no more, no less.
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On Monday, October 11, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
i am ashamed to say i've never actually read your work before but...i should smack myself for not reading it. I'm deeply impressed
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On Monday, October 11, 2004, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
impressive - paints over the scratches- or they.ll see the- [fault lines] of hope - lemmie say that this is the closest i've come to your works mr. outsix. poetry in it's most powerful transparent form. I marvle. [D&A]
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