Comments by sIo
- "Chills like the morgue crept out of my Christmas stocking and panic like i was the one on the slab covered in bells and gingerbread...elegant and crushing. Smells like dead hope twitching with its last nerve."
Posted by sIo on ""Sinister Wine"" by Sorrowful Jester
- "This has me tearing up. My dad died alone in his bed. My heart splatters with hammerlike swings and devours itself like quicksand within a blackhole just to spit itself back out like tuberculosis. Fantastically saddening sir. "
Posted by sIo on "The Rain and I" by Sorrowful Jester
- "Positively oozing with visuals and creative doorways. The rhythm was a wonderful mixture of several different styles which i applaud you for getting your hands dirty and writing what you feel until it comfortably winds together. I look forward to more. "
Posted by sIo on "How can I speak without a mouth" by Jonas Robinson
- "Well, fuck a duck. I now feel drastically less talented as a writer. I love it. I will be back for more of your ravings..."
Posted by sIo on "-The Man in the Chair-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
- "Further on I’ll have to reread this. I see where you’re going and I just lost your direction towards the end. Stimulating for sure. "
Posted by sIo on "There is a way" by midnights voice
- "Awestruck. Gouged in the throat and holding my breath along with tears and a whimper. Home couldn’t be so close to words as this. Brava. "
Posted by sIo on "It Should Have Been Better" by cre
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