Comments by steuss
- ""And I wonder if the darkness deepens
Or the wind pauses to add my keening
To its wail" The faltering confidance in this poem held me avidly. I'm enjoying both reading this and attmepting to understand all of its intricacies. Well Done!"
Posted by steuss on "Give Me This Treachery" by cre
- "This poem is amazing. I enjoy the play on colors and visions that you create before my eyes. I love, "we catch rainbows
and bend them into memories
exchanging tears
for rain drops"
"
Posted by steuss on "footsteps through the sky" by Sin
- "This is amazingly dark and raptuous. The images of death and dancing are amazing as i feel myself being swept away on musical beats rushing closer to the emptiness of death. Well done."
Posted by steuss on "Mourning Ridge" by Guttercat
- "I'm amazed. The sheer epic yet simple journey carried me along as i stepped in line to the beating rhythum of my heart and your words. VERY well done here!"
Posted by steuss on "Fire Dance" by Chameleon
- "This flows so wonderfully. I really enjoyed both the words used and the sound they invoked! Well Done!"
Posted by steuss on "The Whole" by elisa
- "You capture such intense moments with your words and description, It is amazingly well done. I've been there. I know it, but this is how it feels transcribed to words... wonderful."
Posted by steuss on "the shattering of the dream" by KittyStryker
- "I'm speechless... the honesty here is touching. I feel a profound sense of peace, sorrow, joy, just a mix of most welcome emotion. WELL DONE! (and i love your ending)"
Posted by steuss on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "This made me shiver, and i read it again, and still chills crept up my arms. The strength of your words is intoxicating. I just LOVE the last line! Well Done!"
Posted by steuss on "Oblivion" by AshtrayDirt
- "This flows so well! It can be difficult writing like this.. Art is an impression, and poetry the greatest form. I really like this, both your word's meanings, and their placements."
Posted by steuss on "Views of the Lesser Skilled" by liquid_emotion
- "I really enjoy this, it is incredibly thought-provoking. The words you've chosen here fit incredibly well. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "Distance...." by Spiritus_Frumenti
- "This was beautiful, I really enjoy the rhyme and the layout. Very well done. The sorrowful joy that i get just makes me smile. !!!"
Posted by steuss on "Faerie Wing Dreams" by Syn
- "Very well done, i love the use of repitition, and the progressive developement of the stanzas. I was pleased to see an ending that offered release and growth! Yay! Great Read!"
Posted by steuss on "Seaside" by Kinkypoptart
- "I really enjoy your style, the use fo the ( ) 's are wonderful, like the poem is the text outside, and that what you really mean is the combination, that people usually only see the words outside the parenthises. WELL done!"
Posted by steuss on "from your ice petal." by FindAgentX
- "it is difficult to hold onto your faith, it is good to see such conviction. I really enjoy the sense of hope and joy, especially in the last few phrases"
Posted by steuss on "faith" by a restless wanderer
- "Such great thoughts, and the blur of what is real is such a vivid almost dreamlike illusion. Very well done!"
Posted by steuss on "Reality" by cre
- "i so enjoy this. Despite the loss of innocence.. still, a great read with insight to how experiance changes you."
Posted by steuss on "The Sun That Morning" by cre
- "amazing. Despite the desire to push away, and run, there is still a hope within the last lines of embrace. Great work, i too know the trials of stubborness =)"
Posted by steuss on "A dream" by Bluegirl
- "Again, the flow and rhyme is breathtaking, which doens't detract from the meaning. Very intregueing (sp?) read."
Posted by steuss on "Touched" by Godot
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