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Oblivion
By AshtrayDirt
Do you miss the kiss of my cold lips?
Close your eyes and let yourself slip.
Do you miss the risk of my emptiness?
Touch the black in this bottomless pit,
Feel the bliss of oblivion.
I want to crush the world with my fists,
Offer up the blood of the faithless.
Sacrifice brings light into the darkness
Down upon your knees before the goddess
Withdrawn, I bury your dead
A new day is dawning, with a gun to my head
Curse the silence, paint the sunset red.
A new day is dawning,
Nothing is sacred.
Open your eyes with a feeling of dread,
God is laughing with a gun to my head.
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Copyright 2003 AshtrayDirt
Published on Saturday, July 12, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, April 21, 2006, Muse
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wrote:
mm..this was like hysterical laughter ringing in my ears
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A former member wrote:
totally kiks ass oblivion
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On Thursday, September 2, 2004, steuss
(92) wrote:
This made me shiver, and i read it again, and still chills crept up my arms. The strength of your words is intoxicating. I just LOVE the last line! Well Done!
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A former member wrote:
This poem has been one of the best I've read so far. I only just entered the site and have found few that I can relate to. You and thprophetuntold are my favorite.
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On Thursday, November 27, 2003, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Raw. true. god has a certian sick sense of humor.
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
Life really is against us isn't it. It's a challenge, but you can make it your own. I see that shit. Good stuff
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A former member wrote:
Great..I really enjoyed this piece
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On Tuesday, September 9, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
I like it! the sheer nerve you show here is refreshing... I think I will enjoy reading more of your offerings...
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On Friday, August 15, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
This is the kind of "slap you in the face" poetry that I live for. I am so glad I discovered you.
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On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
brilliant, perfectly said, articulate........urban
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A former member wrote:
Pretty good write
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A former member wrote:
Nicely said. I like.
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A former member wrote:
Nice. I enjoyed the last line.
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